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Rising Stars Stable
09:24:35 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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300ebs quest foals

EEE++ AA auction
Top Tier Arabians
09:10:09 Misty
WWW AA stud for sale, #61 AALB

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NightClan
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Also, seeking pricing help!
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DragonFyre Estate
09:02:29 Whip
Clear out Auction. WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
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Blueberry Ledge
08:49:25 
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PON Embryo Auction for yr194.
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MakeEm Fancy
08:41:13 Ally 💜
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Port Royal Equines
08:36:33 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.

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Colored Captures, Sexed Embryos, Maps, Decor, and more! All items have been discounted temporarily.

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Geldings and Bravery Mares for sale!
Angels angels
08:33:31 Will Buy Brindles!!
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WEP-P tobi pon mare 10k obo
Sleepwalker Centre
08:33:13 Walker
*Plenty of ebs

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Rising Stars Stable
09:24:35 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
300ebs quest foals

EEE++ AA auction
Top Tier Arabians
09:10:09 Misty
WWW AA stud for sale, #61 AALB

-HEE Click-
NightClan
09:08:40 Night
Ends at noon!
-HEE Click-

Also, seeking pricing help!
-HEE Click-
DragonFyre Estate
09:02:29 Whip
Clear out Auction. WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
-HEE Click-
Blueberry Ledge
08:49:25 
-HEE Click-

PON Embryo Auction for yr194.
WWW
WEW
EWW
WWE
MakeEm Fancy
08:41:13 Ally 💜
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
08:36:33 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.

-HEE Click-
Colored Captures, Sexed Embryos, Maps, Decor, and more! All items have been discounted temporarily.

-HEE Click-
Geldings and Bravery Mares for sale!
Angels angels
08:33:31 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
WEP-P tobi pon mare 10k obo
Sleepwalker Centre
08:33:13 Walker
*Plenty of ebs

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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