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12:55:05 Wynter/Ghostly

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WWE rated RID stallion up for breeding at 5k mush with no minimum breed requirement. He has produced many EEEs and EWEs.

Zodiac Stars

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Looking to buy an upgrade. I have 160k ready to send over. Please pm me

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Sunni

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Question about the value of my WWW colt.

Neptunes Waters

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PEE 800. Would be a great show gelding

Mooncloud Magic

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WWW KNN freshie straws
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WWW LB knn mare embryos
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Selling W+ knn
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Elysium Opalus

11:33:43 free palestine

0.0%/G1/short gens
WEEs and KNN
WC Braves
Rare colors
CHEAP sales studs and broods
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Daybreak

11:21:57

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Bits for sale $80

Valhalla Acreage

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WWW AA up for stud 9 straws left in store

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June 12, 2017 09:14 PM

Zephyr Elites

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I would love some critique for this piece! Please give honest opinions don't be afraid to tell me exactly what you think.

http://oi63.tinypic.com/21j26h3.jpg

Edited at June 12, 2017 09:14 PM by Freedom Ranch

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June 13, 2017 05:04 AM

Moonlight Stud

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Looks nice. But you have smudged the horse to much, making it look fake. I'd suggest using a different rate or opacity. Other than that it looks good!

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June 13, 2017 10:58 AM

Zephyr Elites

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Moonlight stud said:
Looks nice. But you have smudged the horse to much, making it look fake. I'd suggest using a different rate or opacity. Other than that it looks good!

Thanks, I will try a lower opacity next time.

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June 13, 2017 06:13 PM

Andraste Equine

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Yeah, it's blended a bit too much and the horse is too bright for the backround. I suggest looking for horse stock that matches the brightness.

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July 3, 2017 06:36 PM

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Maybe add an shadow. It can help the image look more like a photo than a manip.

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