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Nightingales Ridge

01:02:58 Issy

Hmm buzzy...Good lad

Cloud Peak Stables

01:02:05 Cloud

Even the best 1yo SD gelding typically won't level until week 6.

Nightingales Ridge

01:01:39 Issy

He's a gelding only getting trained in XC I think it's fairly normal?

01:00:25 Bug | Flea | KPH

cloud
I'm pretty sure it's because he's a gelding and trained SD

12:59:31 Fantasy | Fanta

Cloud
I didn't think shows leveled up horses any faster than usual.

Cloud Peak Stables

12:53:30 Cloud

This is first time I've seen a yearling at level 2 after 4 trainings. Must be from all the member shows it was entered in:
-HEE Click-

12:51:04 Win | Water

Thanks !

12:50:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Yep

12:50:38 Win | Water

Angel, is your second account Lovely Angels?

12:47:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I really hope leaving campus will be easier today than it was Tuesday. That was hell lol

12:46:22

I got a breed Tobiano quest,

12:45:19 Fantasy | Fanta

Ally
Hey I've got that quest too

12:43:26 Ivy / poison ivy

Win

thanks

12:42:56 Ally 💜

Find 100 eden bucks in explore >.> alright challenge accepted

12:42:43 Win | Water

Ivy, nice horses you got there

12:42:02 Ivy / poison ivy

-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-

PM me

12:41:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ivy

12:41:03 Ivy / poison ivy

i need you angel

12:40:59 Win | Water

Y'all, she's gonna be Sub-Par for everything, but she is kinda pretty, isn't she? -HEE Click-

12:40:37 Ivy / poison ivy

angel

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Nightingales Ridge

01:02:58 Issy

Hmm buzzy...Good lad

Cloud Peak Stables

01:02:05 Cloud

Even the best 1yo SD gelding typically won't level until week 6.

Nightingales Ridge

01:01:39 Issy

He's a gelding only getting trained in XC I think it's fairly normal?

01:00:25 Bug | Flea | KPH

cloud
I'm pretty sure it's because he's a gelding and trained SD

12:59:31 Fantasy | Fanta

Cloud
I didn't think shows leveled up horses any faster than usual.

Cloud Peak Stables

12:53:30 Cloud

This is first time I've seen a yearling at level 2 after 4 trainings. Must be from all the member shows it was entered in:
-HEE Click-

12:51:04 Win | Water

Thanks !

12:50:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Yep

12:50:38 Win | Water

Angel, is your second account Lovely Angels?

12:47:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I really hope leaving campus will be easier today than it was Tuesday. That was hell lol

12:46:22

I got a breed Tobiano quest,

12:45:19 Fantasy | Fanta

Ally
Hey I've got that quest too

12:43:26 Ivy / poison ivy

Win

thanks

12:42:56 Ally 💜

Find 100 eden bucks in explore >.> alright challenge accepted

12:42:43 Win | Water

Ivy, nice horses you got there

12:42:02 Ivy / poison ivy

-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-

PM me

12:41:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ivy

12:41:03 Ivy / poison ivy

i need you angel

12:40:59 Win | Water

Y'all, she's gonna be Sub-Par for everything, but she is kinda pretty, isn't she? -HEE Click-

12:40:37 Ivy / poison ivy

angel

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May 26, 2021 08:02 PM

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Heyy guys

I'm currently trying to get back into art and I'm trying to find my own style. I think I'm getting there but I'm not completely happy with my work. I can't put my finger on what it could be. The pieces below are more realistic pieces and I'm going to try working on more fantasy-like pieces to see if that helps me improve. Anyways I'm getting off track.

I'm just looking for a few people to hardcore critique my art so I can try and improve to the point I'm comfortable and happy with my work :)

Examples:

(newest one where i've found my style ^^)

May 27, 2021 05:23 AM

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Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

May 27, 2021 05:54 AM

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Thank you so much I really apperciate it! Not too harsh at all <3

Werty said:

Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

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