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Barbury Estates
05:44:57 Amelia
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Barbury Estates
05:35:24 Amelia
*could
Barbury Estates
05:31:40 Amelia
do you think I sell adoptables of those? Would it work?
Fantasy Horses
05:31:09 Fantasy | Fanta
Amelia
yes it does
Barbury Estates
05:30:48 Amelia
does the link work?
Meadowdown
05:30:47 
Sting -
The story of my life with trying to get WWW babies :'(
Narran Park
05:19:09 Sting
Well thats just rude.
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WWW/WWE
Fantasy Horses
05:19:03 Fantasy | Fanta
Sting
Haha, I like that nickname lol
Thanks!
Narran Park
05:17:34 Sting
Congrats Fanta! Thats great!
Fantasy Horses
05:17:33 Fantasy | Fanta
Sting
Oof that's painful
Narran Park
05:16:57 Sting
-HEE Click-
I mean...WWWxWWE and we are only up 1..
Fantasy Horses
05:16:15 Fantasy | Fanta
Sting
It went okay. I only had 2 matches for RO so only two horses with week 4s. Both colts, one had 3 up (ANGER) and the other...
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I love him even more now.
Narran Park
05:16:09 Sting
I am just going through them now. 1 EEE was up 5/6 so thats nice.
the RO gods didnt give me anything above an ewe last RO, so nothing too exciting here.
Angels angels
05:14:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
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Oh and I really like this girl. She did decent enough
Angels angels
05:13:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sting
Did yours do well?
I have like 2 others I want to keep that only went up 3 but I am going to see how their week 7s are before I decide
Angels angels
05:13:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ooo nice chimmy
Barbury Estates
05:12:28 Amelia
-Click-
does that link work?
Sunni
05:12:27 Sunni bunny
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O~O
I know this girl won't rate well but what is the chances of capturing a that.
Narran Park
05:12:22 Sting
Congrats to you both! They are ripper foals!
Angels angels
05:11:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sting
Oooo mine was pretty awesome
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Barbury Estates
05:44:57 Amelia
-HEE Click-
poll
Barbury Estates
05:35:24 Amelia
*could
Barbury Estates
05:31:40 Amelia
do you think I sell adoptables of those? Would it work?
Fantasy Horses
05:31:09 Fantasy | Fanta
Amelia
yes it does
Barbury Estates
05:30:48 Amelia
does the link work?
Meadowdown
05:30:47 
Sting -
The story of my life with trying to get WWW babies :'(
Narran Park
05:19:09 Sting
Well thats just rude.
-HEE Click-
WWW/WWE
Fantasy Horses
05:19:03 Fantasy | Fanta
Sting
Haha, I like that nickname lol
Thanks!
Narran Park
05:17:34 Sting
Congrats Fanta! Thats great!
Fantasy Horses
05:17:33 Fantasy | Fanta
Sting
Oof that's painful
Narran Park
05:16:57 Sting
-HEE Click-
I mean...WWWxWWE and we are only up 1..
Fantasy Horses
05:16:15 Fantasy | Fanta
Sting
It went okay. I only had 2 matches for RO so only two horses with week 4s. Both colts, one had 3 up (ANGER) and the other...
-HEE Click-
I love him even more now.
Narran Park
05:16:09 Sting
I am just going through them now. 1 EEE was up 5/6 so thats nice.
the RO gods didnt give me anything above an ewe last RO, so nothing too exciting here.
Angels angels
05:14:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Oh and I really like this girl. She did decent enough
Angels angels
05:13:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sting
Did yours do well?
I have like 2 others I want to keep that only went up 3 but I am going to see how their week 7s are before I decide
Angels angels
05:13:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ooo nice chimmy
Barbury Estates
05:12:28 Amelia
-Click-
does that link work?
Sunni
05:12:27 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
O~O
I know this girl won't rate well but what is the chances of capturing a that.
Narran Park
05:12:22 Sting
Congrats to you both! They are ripper foals!
Angels angels
05:11:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sting
Oooo mine was pretty awesome
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

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Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:20 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Hello! Some of you already know me^^ it's me Dark! I've been making art for a long time and unfortunately worked on a very old, laggy iPad. Now that I have a new iPad, I'm open to learning!!
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I am open to criticism and help!
I am also interested in:
how much is it worth?
Tier?
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old art is in my gallery

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:29 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:21 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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latest art to criticize

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:24 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:38 AM


Gem
 
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Hi!!!! I LOVE this piece!!!!! I saw it on Imp's stable a few days ago and was just blown away. I adore the contrast and the lighting and the drama. It's truly stunning and I would totally steal it. I had to stare for a bit to find anything to critique haha!!! ❤️
A few little things:
  • Looking at the jewelry on the tail, the cuffs should be casting a very small shadow on the horse to illustrate that they're not just markings. Along the same point, the cuff closer to the base of the tail, there is hair growing out of it. Logically I think the hair would be trapped inside the cuff? So maybe erase the few strands there. And if I'm totally misinterpreting it and they are meant to be markings, please ignore lol
  • As I mentioned, I adore the lighting. It makes it super dramatic and just gorgeous. The only spot I would adjust slightly is the chest/front shoulder. It seems unnaturally light when the direct light source is on the opposite side of the horse.
  • Because the background is so vibrant and green, I think it would make sense to have a bit more of that color incorporated/cast onto the horse. However, for this piece it feels like more of a stylistic choice and would work either way.
  • Last tiny thing, looking at where the tail docks to the horse's rump, I feel like the rump should be in front of the base of the tail. Meaning that there should be some sort of shading making a distinction between the two areas with shading rather than a direct connection. If this doesn't make sense I'd be happy to sketch what I mean.

    Lots of love!!! ❤️
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:45 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you^^
First art on the new ipad - a lot of work go get better but ur tips are awesome as always^^
Gem!
oh and yea they are fur markings not jewelry but thank you!^^

Edited at January 31, 2025 10:48 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 11:54 AM


Gem
 
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Okay haha!! I would suggest maybe making the tail markings less shiny then so they don't look quite so metallic but they're still super cool :D
You're most welcome 🥰
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 04:46 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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new art for Criticism and price help!
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Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:15 AM


Gem
 
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Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:19 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you for always being here XD^^
I only do the black for the vampire - the dark atmosphere is supposed to make it a little creepier ^^
and yeah - hair is my biggest problem ;C

Gem said:
Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3



Edited at February 8, 2025 11:20 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:21 AM


Wolf Dancer
 
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So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:22 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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<3 <3

Wolf Dancer said:
So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!



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