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Rubygem
06:30:21 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
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I play there other game too :D
Embervale Acres
06:22:11 Solar Phoenix
Oh, nice
-HEE Click-
Hot 2 Trot
06:06:57 ♡Holly♡
Alright bye bye!
Lunalovegood
06:04:24 Loony/Loony Tune
Holly
yeah
gotta go, seee you later
i may chat to some mods later about my background stock idea
Cedar Grove Stables
06:02:30 Holly
You doing alright Luna? Thats a lot of full stops xD
Hot 2 Trot
06:00:11 ♡Holly♡
Lol I know right
Siren Sound Estates
05:55:39 S҉ Sem
Holly, that's a special skill, alright XD
Hot 2 Trot
05:54:25 ♡Holly♡
Sem
I always give him potion like a minute before I think its 12 am and so I get like one thing 😭
Lunalovegood
05:53:09 Loony/Loony Tune
Holly
good...
Hot 2 Trot
05:52:55 ♡Holly♡
Back
Siren Sound Estates
05:51:00 S҉ Sem
Gotta love the accountant. Sweet gifts of ...cleaning supply.
Lunalovegood
05:40:54 Loony/Loony Tune
Bye hol
Hot 2 Trot
05:38:49 ♡Holly♡
One second, gonna poof again
Lunalovegood
05:36:16 Loony/Loony Tune
Holly.....
Hot 2 Trot
05:35:18 ♡Holly♡
Oof I poofed
Lunalovegood
05:34:58 Loony/Loony Tune
Nori, of course :)
happy to help
Southmoon
05:30:55 Nori
thanks!
Lunalovegood
05:30:36 Loony/Loony Tune
Nori
i shall send you the same thing :)
Southmoon
05:29:20 Nori
I'm also kind of a newbie and have the same question. Didn't even know it was a thing. Lol.
Lunalovegood
05:23:42 Loony/Loony Tune
Golden
not sure but if you need an explanation then PM me :)

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Rubygem
06:30:21 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
-Click-

I play there other game too :D
Embervale Acres
06:22:11 Solar Phoenix
Oh, nice
-HEE Click-
Hot 2 Trot
06:06:57 ♡Holly♡
Alright bye bye!
Lunalovegood
06:04:24 Loony/Loony Tune
Holly
yeah
gotta go, seee you later
i may chat to some mods later about my background stock idea
Cedar Grove Stables
06:02:30 Holly
You doing alright Luna? Thats a lot of full stops xD
Hot 2 Trot
06:00:11 ♡Holly♡
Lol I know right
Siren Sound Estates
05:55:39 S҉ Sem
Holly, that's a special skill, alright XD
Hot 2 Trot
05:54:25 ♡Holly♡
Sem
I always give him potion like a minute before I think its 12 am and so I get like one thing 😭
Lunalovegood
05:53:09 Loony/Loony Tune
Holly
good...
Hot 2 Trot
05:52:55 ♡Holly♡
Back
Siren Sound Estates
05:51:00 S҉ Sem
Gotta love the accountant. Sweet gifts of ...cleaning supply.
Lunalovegood
05:40:54 Loony/Loony Tune
Bye hol
Hot 2 Trot
05:38:49 ♡Holly♡
One second, gonna poof again
Lunalovegood
05:36:16 Loony/Loony Tune
Holly.....
Hot 2 Trot
05:35:18 ♡Holly♡
Oof I poofed
Lunalovegood
05:34:58 Loony/Loony Tune
Nori, of course :)
happy to help
Southmoon
05:30:55 Nori
thanks!
Lunalovegood
05:30:36 Loony/Loony Tune
Nori
i shall send you the same thing :)
Southmoon
05:29:20 Nori
I'm also kind of a newbie and have the same question. Didn't even know it was a thing. Lol.
Lunalovegood
05:23:42 Loony/Loony Tune
Golden
not sure but if you need an explanation then PM me :)

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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