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Alpine Acres
01:18:39 Lily/Alpine
oooh, Sugar Cane is perfect!
Sunflowerz
12:45:44 
I like Carmel drip a lot, or even sugar cane.
Redwood Ridge
12:41:20 
Sherpa map in raid
Fantasy Horses
12:41:08 Fantasy | Fanta
A few days after I get that 100 stall barn I need another :')
Alpine Acres
12:39:42 Lily/Alpine
or 'Caramel Cane' after her sire? She's gorgeous :)
Sunflowerz
12:39:06 
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I can't get over this filly's coat, I don't know what to name her.
"Caramel drip?"
Rising Stars Stable
12:31:55 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Dun horse in raid
God is Mighty Stable
12:29:30 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
He's going to Angel as well
Fantasy Horses
12:28:12 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
If her bravery is bad she's going to Angel lol
TB Goin Crazy!
12:26:41 
I can't stop gushing about how pretty she is
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
12:26:16 Arctic Katz
I like it, Fern
Alpine Acres
12:26:11 Lily/Alpine
Thank you! <3
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:25:47 BluebonnetBree
There ya go @Lily :)
Alpine Acres
12:24:40 Lily/Alpine
I have the raid quest, anyone want to help me with it? :)
God is Mighty Stable
12:23:11 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Hey, Trish
How are you doing?
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:23:11 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
kind've like this for the beehive idea
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Morning Glory Farms
12:21:58 Terici/Dino/Trish
No chatspeak please Blue Bonnet :) make sure youre spelling out your words
Rising Stars Stable
12:18:45 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
If only he could of been a LpLp as well
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:12:52 BluebonnetBree
Ty! <3
God is Mighty Stable
12:10:46 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Blue
yes! He couldn't be homo fer anything besides Ch

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Alpine Acres
01:18:39 Lily/Alpine
oooh, Sugar Cane is perfect!
Sunflowerz
12:45:44 
I like Carmel drip a lot, or even sugar cane.
Redwood Ridge
12:41:20 
Sherpa map in raid
Fantasy Horses
12:41:08 Fantasy | Fanta
A few days after I get that 100 stall barn I need another :')
Alpine Acres
12:39:42 Lily/Alpine
or 'Caramel Cane' after her sire? She's gorgeous :)
Sunflowerz
12:39:06 
-HEE Click-

I can't get over this filly's coat, I don't know what to name her.
"Caramel drip?"
Rising Stars Stable
12:31:55 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Dun horse in raid
God is Mighty Stable
12:29:30 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
He's going to Angel as well
Fantasy Horses
12:28:12 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
If her bravery is bad she's going to Angel lol
TB Goin Crazy!
12:26:41 
I can't stop gushing about how pretty she is
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
12:26:16 Arctic Katz
I like it, Fern
Alpine Acres
12:26:11 Lily/Alpine
Thank you! <3
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:25:47 BluebonnetBree
There ya go @Lily :)
Alpine Acres
12:24:40 Lily/Alpine
I have the raid quest, anyone want to help me with it? :)
God is Mighty Stable
12:23:11 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Hey, Trish
How are you doing?
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:23:11 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
kind've like this for the beehive idea
-Click-
Morning Glory Farms
12:21:58 Terici/Dino/Trish
No chatspeak please Blue Bonnet :) make sure youre spelling out your words
Rising Stars Stable
12:18:45 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
If only he could of been a LpLp as well
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:12:52 BluebonnetBree
Ty! <3
God is Mighty Stable
12:10:46 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Blue
yes! He couldn't be homo fer anything besides Ch

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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