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WWE

06:34:32 Blu

Tons of horses for sale!
WB, KNN, PON, ISH
RO Foals that are left will get FR.
Wc through Colors
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Brindle stallion. Wild caught

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Wild EEE KNN mare
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16 hours to go
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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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