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Keeper of the Lost
11:59:12 Pumpkin Spice
Thank you, Willow!
Rising Stars Stable
11:57:28 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Nooo, my premium ran out
God is Mighty Stable
11:54:20 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Congrats Pumpkin!
Keeper of the Lost
11:49:06 Pumpkin Spice
Ah I am so excited for today! Just closed my first home and I finally get to start cleaning and decorating this weekend :)
Sleepwalker Centre
11:35:37 Walker
OOOO gorgeous!!
MakeEm Fancy
11:33:33 Ally 💜
This is one I got this morning
-HEE Click-
Sleepwalker Centre
11:26:44 Walker
plus she got the frame!
Sleepwalker Centre
11:26:31 Walker
As much as I complain about (plain) dun, I do love it when you get the super dark points and stripes
MakeEm Fancy
11:25:45 Ally 💜
Ohh she is pretty!
Sleepwalker Centre
11:25:02 Walker
-HEE Click- oh hello, cutie... rate nicely please
Sleepwalker Centre
11:24:41 Walker
I bet!! Drains suuuuck
MakeEm Fancy
11:23:22 Ally 💜
At least I got my drain out >.> I hated that thing
Skye's Paradise
11:23:09 Pickle
What kind of insurance do you have Ally? Usually most places accept insurance.
Sleepwalker Centre
11:22:49 Walker
good god i mean
Sleepwalker Centre
11:22:43 Walker
I don't blame you, god good!!
MakeEm Fancy
11:22:09 Ally 💜
It was wild 😭 I wont go back. It was insane even getting in.
Sleepwalker Centre
11:20:34 Walker
Ally,
AND you just had surgery?! >gets in my car and drives to that hospital for no particular reason<
MakeEm Fancy
11:19:29 Ally 💜
Yeah especially when I was sitting for 6 hours to get a drain taken out 🙃 like take it out so I can go home and sleep I just had surgery @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
11:18:30 Walker
Rude of them to accuse you of that outright???
MakeEm Fancy
11:11:22 Ally 💜
The hospital that accused me of wanting drugs I only have went to twice so it doesn't make sense why they would think I would want them

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Keeper of the Lost
11:59:12 Pumpkin Spice
Thank you, Willow!
Rising Stars Stable
11:57:28 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Nooo, my premium ran out
God is Mighty Stable
11:54:20 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Congrats Pumpkin!
Keeper of the Lost
11:49:06 Pumpkin Spice
Ah I am so excited for today! Just closed my first home and I finally get to start cleaning and decorating this weekend :)
Sleepwalker Centre
11:35:37 Walker
OOOO gorgeous!!
MakeEm Fancy
11:33:33 Ally 💜
This is one I got this morning
-HEE Click-
Sleepwalker Centre
11:26:44 Walker
plus she got the frame!
Sleepwalker Centre
11:26:31 Walker
As much as I complain about (plain) dun, I do love it when you get the super dark points and stripes
MakeEm Fancy
11:25:45 Ally 💜
Ohh she is pretty!
Sleepwalker Centre
11:25:02 Walker
-HEE Click- oh hello, cutie... rate nicely please
Sleepwalker Centre
11:24:41 Walker
I bet!! Drains suuuuck
MakeEm Fancy
11:23:22 Ally 💜
At least I got my drain out >.> I hated that thing
Skye's Paradise
11:23:09 Pickle
What kind of insurance do you have Ally? Usually most places accept insurance.
Sleepwalker Centre
11:22:49 Walker
good god i mean
Sleepwalker Centre
11:22:43 Walker
I don't blame you, god good!!
MakeEm Fancy
11:22:09 Ally 💜
It was wild 😭 I wont go back. It was insane even getting in.
Sleepwalker Centre
11:20:34 Walker
Ally,
AND you just had surgery?! >gets in my car and drives to that hospital for no particular reason<
MakeEm Fancy
11:19:29 Ally 💜
Yeah especially when I was sitting for 6 hours to get a drain taken out 🙃 like take it out so I can go home and sleep I just had surgery @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
11:18:30 Walker
Rude of them to accuse you of that outright???
MakeEm Fancy
11:11:22 Ally 💜
The hospital that accused me of wanting drugs I only have went to twice so it doesn't make sense why they would think I would want them

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Help? May 24, 2024 11:59 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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After almost 6 months of drowning under the load of school, work, and animals I finally have had some time to pick up the ole art pen. I'm SO rusty and I feel like these look odd or are missing something but I cannot put my finger on what I did wrong. I would love to get some tips or ideas about what looks funky.
Thanks loads~
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This one was a rider removal.. it was not fun
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Edited at May 25, 2024 08:40 AM by Pegasus Lane
Help? May 25, 2024 12:09 AM


Caprina Springs
 
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i think the lack of a solid outline in some areas of the horse for a highlight is what youre missing. especially the orange one. theres no reflected backlight from the bright sun. i like where you were going with the soft light around the silhouette of the horse but it seems to just cover it. what setting do you have that specific layer with the soft light?
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i also just noticed this; the bg upstages the horse because of how sharp the image is, try a light blur on them

Edited at May 25, 2024 12:11 AM by Caprina Springs
Help? May 25, 2024 08:43 AM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Caprina Springs said:
i think the lack of a solid outline in some areas of the horse for a highlight is what youre missing. especially the orange one. theres no reflected backlight from the bright sun. i like where you were going with the soft light around the silhouette of the horse but it seems to just cover it. what setting do you have that specific layer with the soft light?
EDIT
i also just noticed this; the bg upstages the horse because of how sharp the image is, try a light blur on them


Omg thank you!!
Images have been updated on the first post if anyone else has criticism :) Links are clicky so you can really see all the details ❤
Help? May 25, 2024 08:00 PM


Angels angels
 
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The only issues I see are very small details.
The legs on the black horse look a bit undefined and almost swollen, and its feet are a bit more blury than the rest of the horse. It also is missing some definition in some areas, such as the back legs kind of blend into a black mass. You could try using some very light white to define the shape a bit more.
The orange one looks very good, except for the front leg and foot is a bit sharp and blocky. It also could use some of the highlights for definition as well. Also the face/muzzle looks a bit big for the horse's face, and the ears are a bit blury and could use some definition.
I hope this isn't to harsh. Like I said just being very nit picky if thats what you are looking for! lol :) They look amazing though!

Edited at May 25, 2024 08:01 PM by Angels angels
Help? May 25, 2024 08:10 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Angels angels said:
The only issues I see are very small details.
The legs on the black horse look a bit undefined and almost swollen, and its feet are a bit more blury than the rest of the horse. It also is missing some definition in some areas, such as the back legs kind of blend into a black mass. You could try using some very light white to define the shape a bit more.
The orange one looks very good, except for the front leg and foot is a bit sharp and blocky. It also could use some of the highlights for definition as well. Also the face/muzzle looks a bit big for the horse's face, and the ears are a bit blury and could use some definition.
I hope this isn't to harsh. Like I said just being very nit picky if thats what you are looking for! lol :) They look amazing though!


That's exactly what I was looking for, thank you! <3
Help? May 26, 2024 03:41 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Alrighty, here are the current pieces. Thank you both for the advice! If there's any nit-picking to be done about anything else please don't be afraid to offend me :) It's quite hard to do lol
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Help? May 30, 2024 08:09 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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Wow! they look awesome with those little edits! your art is stunning!
Help? May 30, 2024 08:09 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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double post erg

Edited at May 30, 2024 08:09 PM by Dash and Duchess

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