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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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Dash and Duchess

06:22:43 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, He totally deserves them! And fingers crossed for you, He's so shiny!

06:21:27 Sun/Sunny

Thank you! He will most definitely be getting arts. Really hope he’s strong I’ve been doing WB’s for so long Dx

06:13:55

very pretty Sunny!!

Insignia Elites

06:13:40 Em

I cannot find a TB without Sabino that matches my girl well xD

Dash and Duchess

06:13:21 DD | ~Squizard~

Oh he's gorgeous Sunny >.>

06:10:57 Eagle

Ooo thats exciting Angel I'm eager to see what she throws lol

06:10:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Eagle
I have th gnome

06:10:13 Sun/Sunny

-HEE Click- I love the tobi on this dude

06:09:32 Eagle

Angel lol

06:06:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

How do I make a sacrifice to the HEE gods to make this embryo go good tomorrow? XD

06:00:43 evebot

Wow! Beautiful!

05:57:56 Fawn

Getting some stunning foals <3

-HEE Click-
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05:55:29 Sting

it could be called Black Bay.
Make all the mahoganys look a little nicer.

05:54:14 Sting

I dont think its in game...But i'd love to see a really Dark Bay.
Like almost Black with the mealy points.

Insignia Elites

05:52:39 Em

what other colours/coats are harder to get that isn't random

05:49:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel

It just has to be ee and have one a the other a can be a or A

Insignia Elites

05:48:39 Em

and another one is ee aa

Insignia Elites

05:48:11 Em

The one I just check was ee Aa

05:47:23 Sting

its eeaa right?

Insignia Elites

05:46:41 Em

Whats the genetics for it again?

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Dash and Duchess

06:22:43 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, He totally deserves them! And fingers crossed for you, He's so shiny!

06:21:27 Sun/Sunny

Thank you! He will most definitely be getting arts. Really hope he’s strong I’ve been doing WB’s for so long Dx

06:13:55

very pretty Sunny!!

Insignia Elites

06:13:40 Em

I cannot find a TB without Sabino that matches my girl well xD

Dash and Duchess

06:13:21 DD | ~Squizard~

Oh he's gorgeous Sunny >.>

06:10:57 Eagle

Ooo thats exciting Angel I'm eager to see what she throws lol

06:10:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Eagle
I have th gnome

06:10:13 Sun/Sunny

-HEE Click- I love the tobi on this dude

06:09:32 Eagle

Angel lol

06:06:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

How do I make a sacrifice to the HEE gods to make this embryo go good tomorrow? XD

06:00:43 evebot

Wow! Beautiful!

05:57:56 Fawn

Getting some stunning foals <3

-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

05:55:29 Sting

it could be called Black Bay.
Make all the mahoganys look a little nicer.

05:54:14 Sting

I dont think its in game...But i'd love to see a really Dark Bay.
Like almost Black with the mealy points.

Insignia Elites

05:52:39 Em

what other colours/coats are harder to get that isn't random

05:49:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel

It just has to be ee and have one a the other a can be a or A

Insignia Elites

05:48:39 Em

and another one is ee aa

Insignia Elites

05:48:11 Em

The one I just check was ee Aa

05:47:23 Sting

its eeaa right?

Insignia Elites

05:46:41 Em

Whats the genetics for it again?

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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