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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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Forecast:

Moderate Temperatures and Overcast

Forecast:

Fri 09:09pm

Stables Online: 94

Rising Stars Stable

09:08:07 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
aww, look at her socks

Black Meadow Estate

09:06:22 Meadow

-HEE Click-
Her line is doing so good I have decided to make her a personal brand

Dash and Duchess

09:05:59 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, Ooo good luck on that one too!
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Eivor, crossing my fingers for ya that they'll be good! And lol, when I used to do ISH they hated me xD

Valhalla Acreage

09:04:29 Eivor

My ISH account is doing better than my AA account

Valhalla Acreage

09:04:14 Eivor

But the baby will be Sbsb so hopefully they don't mess up and give me a www

Rising Stars Stable

09:04:00 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
Also crossing fingers for another WWW or WWE from embryos

Dash and Duchess

09:03:22 DD | ~Squizard~

Eivor, ah you're right elysium is SbSb, but at least he's got eprl too 👀

Dash and Duchess

09:02:22 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, hopefully she'll be nice this year >.<

Valhalla Acreage

09:02:11 Eivor

DD sire might be SBSB but isn't tested so I don't know if it is or isn't

Rising Stars Stable

09:01:41 Willow ~ AA Breeder

DD
Thanks, she has disapointed me twice already

Valhalla Acreage

09:01:18 Eivor

Just horses at 18 can no longer breed and they have a chance of dieing every Monday

09:00:35

What does it mean when a horse is labeled a senior horse does it affect fertility or show skills or does it just mark they have a chance of dying

Dash and Duchess

09:00:19 DD | ~Squizard~

Good luck Willow!!

Rising Stars Stable

08:59:41 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
crossing fingers

Dash and Duchess

08:59:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Thanks ya'll! I'm super excited!
-
Eivor, Ooo fingers crossed it'll skip Sb and catch that Tobi 🤩

Valhalla Acreage

08:54:39 Eivor

And it doesn't dodge the tobi

Valhalla Acreage

08:54:15 Eivor

Not missed

Valhalla Acreage

08:54:10 Eivor

Pissed

Valhalla Acreage

08:54:05 Eivor

-HEE Click-
I won't be missed if it has sabino if it's a WWW

Embervale Acres

08:53:23 Solar Phoenix

DD
I want all those girls XD
Really looking forward to seeing how those matches do!

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Rising Stars Stable

09:08:07 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
aww, look at her socks

Black Meadow Estate

09:06:22 Meadow

-HEE Click-
Her line is doing so good I have decided to make her a personal brand

Dash and Duchess

09:05:59 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, Ooo good luck on that one too!
-
Eivor, crossing my fingers for ya that they'll be good! And lol, when I used to do ISH they hated me xD

Valhalla Acreage

09:04:29 Eivor

My ISH account is doing better than my AA account

Valhalla Acreage

09:04:14 Eivor

But the baby will be Sbsb so hopefully they don't mess up and give me a www

Rising Stars Stable

09:04:00 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
Also crossing fingers for another WWW or WWE from embryos

Dash and Duchess

09:03:22 DD | ~Squizard~

Eivor, ah you're right elysium is SbSb, but at least he's got eprl too 👀

Dash and Duchess

09:02:22 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, hopefully she'll be nice this year >.<

Valhalla Acreage

09:02:11 Eivor

DD sire might be SBSB but isn't tested so I don't know if it is or isn't

Rising Stars Stable

09:01:41 Willow ~ AA Breeder

DD
Thanks, she has disapointed me twice already

Valhalla Acreage

09:01:18 Eivor

Just horses at 18 can no longer breed and they have a chance of dieing every Monday

09:00:35

What does it mean when a horse is labeled a senior horse does it affect fertility or show skills or does it just mark they have a chance of dying

Dash and Duchess

09:00:19 DD | ~Squizard~

Good luck Willow!!

Rising Stars Stable

08:59:41 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
crossing fingers

Dash and Duchess

08:59:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Thanks ya'll! I'm super excited!
-
Eivor, Ooo fingers crossed it'll skip Sb and catch that Tobi 🤩

Valhalla Acreage

08:54:39 Eivor

And it doesn't dodge the tobi

Valhalla Acreage

08:54:15 Eivor

Not missed

Valhalla Acreage

08:54:10 Eivor

Pissed

Valhalla Acreage

08:54:05 Eivor

-HEE Click-
I won't be missed if it has sabino if it's a WWW

Embervale Acres

08:53:23 Solar Phoenix

DD
I want all those girls XD
Really looking forward to seeing how those matches do!

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March 11, 2018 09:35 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png

So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.

However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.

Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P

March 11, 2018 10:57 PM

Hallucination Manor

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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D

March 11, 2018 11:10 PM

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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.

March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)

It looks amazing, what a great start. <3

March 11, 2018 11:36 PM

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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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