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Angels angels
08:44:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah hay pastures are definitely worth it. Especially if you have a large number of horses
Insignia Elites
08:43:29 Em
Ok that's what I was thinking. I wouldn't mind a hay pasture or two but I won't save for the crops :)
Angels angels
08:42:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The only thing you can do with crop fields is you can grow grain to use instead of hay, you can do a senior blend to lessen the chance of older horses dying, and you can do a dapple blend which is just for looks. Really more work and money than it is worth
Angels angels
08:41:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
Not really
Insignia Elites
08:41:19 Em
Is crop fields worth it? I know hay is from what im told :)
Angels angels
08:40:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Amelia
You can only grow things in the spring, which is the first week of the month
Angels angels
08:38:52 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh my gosh that perlino is amazing
Angels angels
08:38:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Capp
Ew lol
Cappuccino
08:37:58 Heyy it's Capp
I forgot about this hunk tho -HEE Click-
Cappuccino
08:37:40 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- my 0.25 yearling LOL
Sleepwalker Centre
08:37:34 Walker
Ally,
Thanks!! My mess of geldings and showmares beginning to pay off, literally
Barbury Estates
08:37:33 Amelia
how do you start growing things in the pasture?
Cappuccino
08:36:59 Heyy it's Capp
Oh nice! Ive got one for next month and 1.25 for oct LOL
MakeEm Fancy
08:36:37 Ally 💜
And the colt curse has been strong. I would love some good fillies again
Angels angels
08:36:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Capp
I want to do a regular one because I would be okay with a colt for this match but only if it is a WWW lol so I would be screwed if it was less than WWW and a colt, but a filly can be EWE+
Barbury Estates
08:36:08 Amelia
thank you Walker!
MakeEm Fancy
08:36:04 Ally 💜
I would use just regular but I have 3 Freshies currently and thats a lot for me lol
Cappuccino
08:35:12 Heyy it's Capp
Ive given up on the sexed items - I need some strong boys and I'm too sketch to use colt svens LOL so I leave it old school
MakeEm Fancy
08:34:36 Ally 💜
I feel that
Angels angels
08:34:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have the ebs for all 3 but it hurts to even buy one XD that is a lot of money

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Angels angels
08:44:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah hay pastures are definitely worth it. Especially if you have a large number of horses
Insignia Elites
08:43:29 Em
Ok that's what I was thinking. I wouldn't mind a hay pasture or two but I won't save for the crops :)
Angels angels
08:42:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The only thing you can do with crop fields is you can grow grain to use instead of hay, you can do a senior blend to lessen the chance of older horses dying, and you can do a dapple blend which is just for looks. Really more work and money than it is worth
Angels angels
08:41:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
Not really
Insignia Elites
08:41:19 Em
Is crop fields worth it? I know hay is from what im told :)
Angels angels
08:40:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Amelia
You can only grow things in the spring, which is the first week of the month
Angels angels
08:38:52 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh my gosh that perlino is amazing
Angels angels
08:38:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Capp
Ew lol
Cappuccino
08:37:58 Heyy it's Capp
I forgot about this hunk tho -HEE Click-
Cappuccino
08:37:40 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- my 0.25 yearling LOL
Sleepwalker Centre
08:37:34 Walker
Ally,
Thanks!! My mess of geldings and showmares beginning to pay off, literally
Barbury Estates
08:37:33 Amelia
how do you start growing things in the pasture?
Cappuccino
08:36:59 Heyy it's Capp
Oh nice! Ive got one for next month and 1.25 for oct LOL
MakeEm Fancy
08:36:37 Ally 💜
And the colt curse has been strong. I would love some good fillies again
Angels angels
08:36:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Capp
I want to do a regular one because I would be okay with a colt for this match but only if it is a WWW lol so I would be screwed if it was less than WWW and a colt, but a filly can be EWE+
Barbury Estates
08:36:08 Amelia
thank you Walker!
MakeEm Fancy
08:36:04 Ally 💜
I would use just regular but I have 3 Freshies currently and thats a lot for me lol
Cappuccino
08:35:12 Heyy it's Capp
Ive given up on the sexed items - I need some strong boys and I'm too sketch to use colt svens LOL so I leave it old school
MakeEm Fancy
08:34:36 Ally 💜
I feel that
Angels angels
08:34:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have the ebs for all 3 but it hurts to even buy one XD that is a lot of money

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Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 06:53 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
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Ello!
I've been doing art for quite a few years on HEE, but I feel like my art should be improved more than it is, so I'm asking for some critique on my art! I'm not asking "what can I do to make my art look more like [insert name]'s art", I'm just asking what can I do to improve and make my art look better! Even if you think that everything is perfect except for how I (example) drew the mane or shaded the hooves, then let me know! Or if you think the whole thing is terrible, then please let me know, and suggest ways (or tips if you know any) which I can improve!
All humbleness aside, I'm not too bad of an artist on HEE, but I'd like to be doing sooo much better than what I'm doing now.


I'm going to somewhat make this into a project. Every month, at the end of the month, I'll post a few images on this page which I made the previous month. Then I'll try to apply some of the tips and critique to pieces I make the next month and repeat the cycle. By, let's say.... July of 2019, I'd like to see that I've improved a TON!

I'll also be hosting free art giveaways through this page and possibly offer discounts in my art shop to anyone who gives helpful critique!


Here's some info about my art experience on HEE:
- I started doing art around yr65 (I joined yr61) by coloring linearts. (If I get enough requests, I'll see if I can find a link to the first lineart I colored xD )
- I started doing manips maybe 6 months after that
- I do ALL of my art on PaintToolSAI, a downloadable drawing program. SAI was specifically made for graphic design/drawing, not photomanipulation, so it took me a few years to figure out how to effectively use it for making manips
- Around December 2016 is when I finally "figured out" how to effectively make manips using SAI
-It has now been almost 2 years since then, and though I have definitely improved, I feel that I should be quite a bit more improved


Please note that because I use PaintToolSAI, not Photoshop or GIMP (gimp doesn't work on my laptop for some reason) I do not have access to all the PS/GIMP settings or brushes.


So, because I'm asking for Critique, I'd like to set a few rules, just so there are no hard feelings being passed around. Remeber; everyone may have different opinions or prefer different styles :)
1. Don't be rude
-please don't insult my art or just say that it looks bad. If you do think it looks bad, then please elaborate and tell me why or what I can do to fix it!
-don't tell people that their tips are bad or get into arguments. I would like everyone to be able to have a say without being afraid they'll be harassed for saying it. :)

2. Elaborate/ Don't be Vague
-if you dislike something about a piece or think I could have done something differently, then please say so! But then please elaborate and give me tips or ways which you think I could improve.
-or if you like something that I did on a piece, then please say so! Not all critique has to be negative!

3. You Don't Have to Critique Every Image
-you certainly can if you'd like, but you don't have to critique every image
-If you want, you can also go through my DA and link+critique some of the pieces which I have not posted


That's it! Thank you all sooooooooooooo much for the help!


Stuff to Improve upon for this month based on critique:
-Look for less "awkward" stock that matches the BG better
-Manes and Tails (lol this one is probably gonna be here for a few months)
-positioning and size of horses compared to their BGs
-applying just enough contrast and shading to the horse/ grounding horse
-fixed light source

Edited at April 15, 2018 08:16 PM by ~Skye Acres~
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 06:55 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
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Art Examples (updated 4/ 15/ 2018)
***Because I just started this forum, for the next few months I'll be uploading both old and new art examples***

Link to my DA :
https://skystream11.deviantart.com/
1. https://img00.deviantart.net/ab0d/i/2017/242/8/d/rm__old_friends_by_skystream11-dblttsv.png

2. https://orig00.deviantart.net/7c3f/f/2017/078/e/a/rising_star_w_words_by_skystream11-db2wg6f.jpg

3. https://orig00.deviantart.net/bb99/f/2017/240/4/b/valkyrie_w_creds_by_skystream11-dbllf7o.jpg

4. https://img00.deviantart.net/6dbd/i/2017/287/1/4/rm___sky_fire_by_skystream11-dbql4uo.png

5. https://orig00.deviantart.net/b252/f/2017/315/b/b/serenis_w_markings_w_words_by_skystream11-dbthlbm.jpg

6. https://orig00.deviantart.net/c2a2/f/2018/006/c/6/a1_friesan_w_words___markings_by_skystream11-dbz676z.jpg

7. https://orig00.deviantart.net/3282/f/2018/046/8/7/symphony_of_colour_w_creds_by_skystream11-dc39hcv.jpg
-fix shading

8. https://orig00.deviantart.net/0b23/f/2018/051/a/2/heart_breaker_w_words_by_skystream11-dc3st4z.jpg

9. https://pre00.deviantart.net/3dea/th/pre/f/2018/051/8/a/stormwarning_full_image_by_skystream11-dc3u99s.png

10. https://orig00.deviantart.net/7c33/f/2018/075/7/6/bluecrimsonpassion_w_words_by_skystream11-dc63e87.jpg

11. https://orig00.deviantart.net/4eda/f/2018/088/3/3/hee____horse_avatar___dimmy_s_phoenix_by_skystream11-dc7bqco.jpg

12. https://orig00.deviantart.net/70bb/f/2018/093/e/f/dimmy_s_asi_w_words_by_skystream11-dc7rtcd.jpg

Edited at April 16, 2018 03:21 PM by ~Skye Acres~
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:12 PM

Former Stable
 
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You are absolutely amazing keep doing what you are doing
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Your art is gorgeous! <3
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:17 PM

Former Stable
 
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Wow I love it so much! The bottom one I like the most! I think the one right above it has a weirder, like, um.. how do I elaborate? The fire looks like a stock image, if you get what I mean, but it still looks amazing! That's all I can really find wrong with them, they look really pretty.

Edited at April 15, 2018 07:20 PM by Starset Acres
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:19 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
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Aww thanks everyone <3
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:20 PM


The Dark Arts
 
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Excuse me? What? Improve? Oh my lord, dear I think you're mistaken, you can't possibly get better than your artwork! Astounding skills, I hope I can one day make art like yours! <3
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:28 PM


Helicon Show Horses
 
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Half of these I haven't seen before, Skye. I don't stalk you, lol, but dang. I think in general there are a few that have kind of awkward poses, like maybe you chose stock that wasn't quite right here or there. Specifically, I think the first photo is gorgeous except the front legs bother me because they're very strangely placed and possibly uneven to my perception and don't speak of movement, but the hind end is saying 'trot' to me. The same idea with the third from bottom, just an awkward looking pose to me, that's all.

Hopefully that helps. I'm not an artist, just an artist employer. ;P


Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:32 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
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Thanks Helicon and Celestrial!

Helicon, lol if the 3rd one from the bottom seems a tad awkward (specifically around the head/ shoulders) it may be because I had to reposition the head/neck a smidge. I'm still working on that xD

Edited at April 15, 2018 07:37 PM by ~Skye Acres~
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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Skye these are all absolutely stunning pieces! I am honestly loving each and every one of these and would die if I had talents even close to yours. You are a fantastic artist! One thing you could possibly work on is making sure you have consistent tail textures though? I see some of these pieces have absolutely flawless, smooth tails but a few such as 2, 8, and 10 seem to have rougher, unblended tails? Also as Helicon mentioned, there are just a few tiny details with leg positions and such that are a bit off. Other than that, you've got absolutely gorgeous art and a whole heap of talent! :D

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