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MakeEm Fancy
08:53:44 Ally 💜
So over today
Lynx Glory
08:49:34 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ghost
wow, that sounds fun xD except the last part ..
ghost light stables
08:45:50 moldy bread / ghost
Went to boston museum of science today. I got convinced to watch the 4d animal life movie was really cool but I got the bejusus scared out of me a few times (being sprayed by water and poked by the seat)
Lynx Glory
08:37:52 ⛈ whisper/lynx
xD
Lynx Glory
08:31:08 ⛈ whisper/lynx
void
oh my lord, why did i read that "horse has vanished"
starmutt
08:12:17 marsh 🌈
Omg I keep missing the voting sessions. Got my vote in for once xD
The Old Gods
08:04:41 Void Malign
Honse has been washed. Sorta
SCF Sporting Chance
07:47:22 SCF/Gibbs
SEMI FINAL Rumble voting is up! Vote Here.
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Ellsworths Eden
07:27:53 
Hello Myth
Mythological
07:15:26 Crowley
Sunni
Tim needs some common sense 😓
Mythological
07:12:46 Crowley
Hey Ells
Bluegrass Racing
07:12:08 Blue
Always love when RF gives me a nice and pretty surprise when I just want to be done with breeding.

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Sunni
07:07:29 Sunni bunny
Why is my dog the only one in the family with some common sense xc.
His the only one who didn't dig up the kitten and try and eat it.
Yes I know that's normal for dogs but god ....
He sat by the gate close to me knowing the other 3 was gonna get in big trouble.
Eagle Creek
07:04:28 Eagle
Or I'll have to breed a week late witch isn't too bad
Eagle Creek
07:02:51 Eagle
I bought the straws I need for RO, but I'm not sure I'll be able to afford a Sven. So I might just save the embryos for september.
Aura Show Horses
06:58:16 Peacock/ Pea
really dont wana free range so im trying to sell.
Aura Show Horses
06:57:45 Peacock/ Pea
ha, its hard!
Ellsworths Eden
06:57:17 
I can't imagine downsizing now lol. XD
Aura Show Horses
06:56:13 Peacock/ Pea
Trying to downsize when all your horses are your favorite is tough!0:);
Barbury Estates
06:53:12 Amelia
Whoops meant to do !

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MakeEm Fancy
08:53:44 Ally 💜
So over today
Lynx Glory
08:49:34 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ghost
wow, that sounds fun xD except the last part ..
ghost light stables
08:45:50 moldy bread / ghost
Went to boston museum of science today. I got convinced to watch the 4d animal life movie was really cool but I got the bejusus scared out of me a few times (being sprayed by water and poked by the seat)
Lynx Glory
08:37:52 ⛈ whisper/lynx
xD
Lynx Glory
08:31:08 ⛈ whisper/lynx
void
oh my lord, why did i read that "horse has vanished"
starmutt
08:12:17 marsh 🌈
Omg I keep missing the voting sessions. Got my vote in for once xD
The Old Gods
08:04:41 Void Malign
Honse has been washed. Sorta
SCF Sporting Chance
07:47:22 SCF/Gibbs
SEMI FINAL Rumble voting is up! Vote Here.
-HEE Click-
Ellsworths Eden
07:27:53 
Hello Myth
Mythological
07:15:26 Crowley
Sunni
Tim needs some common sense 😓
Mythological
07:12:46 Crowley
Hey Ells
Bluegrass Racing
07:12:08 Blue
Always love when RF gives me a nice and pretty surprise when I just want to be done with breeding.

-HEE Click-
Sunni
07:07:29 Sunni bunny
Why is my dog the only one in the family with some common sense xc.
His the only one who didn't dig up the kitten and try and eat it.
Yes I know that's normal for dogs but god ....
He sat by the gate close to me knowing the other 3 was gonna get in big trouble.
Eagle Creek
07:04:28 Eagle
Or I'll have to breed a week late witch isn't too bad
Eagle Creek
07:02:51 Eagle
I bought the straws I need for RO, but I'm not sure I'll be able to afford a Sven. So I might just save the embryos for september.
Aura Show Horses
06:58:16 Peacock/ Pea
really dont wana free range so im trying to sell.
Aura Show Horses
06:57:45 Peacock/ Pea
ha, its hard!
Ellsworths Eden
06:57:17 
I can't imagine downsizing now lol. XD
Aura Show Horses
06:56:13 Peacock/ Pea
Trying to downsize when all your horses are your favorite is tough!0:);
Barbury Estates
06:53:12 Amelia
Whoops meant to do !

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Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:24 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zt8M.jpg

I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:29 AM


Flipperruby30
 
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done!
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:47 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:53 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)



Thank you! This helps a lot.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:45 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:49 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)



Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:53 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Mhmm, haha =)

I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:56 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:06 PM

Former Stable
 
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:08 PM


Casanova
 
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like.

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