Horse Eden : Critique please? <3

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Dash and Duchess

08:41:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Canter, unfortunately that's true xD I've been stalking T1 like a hawk now xD

Canterwood Acres

08:40:36 Canter

so many of the art shops are full!

Gemstone Stable

08:39:37 Snow❆Gem

Still in awe that a EWW-W wild RID mare is on the HOTY LB. lol

-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

08:38:41 DD | ~Squizard~

Canter, same xD I need to pamper my new filly for being so good 😭

Canterwood Acres

08:38:02 Canter

speaking of art I need to get some art for my new WWW babies <3

ArcticLights

08:35:38 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Ven, can I ask a potential dumb question?
The hosting site limitations also applies for personal messages?

Maple Tree Eventing

08:34:57 Lydia <3

Ah right, I wasn't exactly sure how I should correctly go about crediting Interstellar for the background. As for the reference, I got the pose from an image I took some years ago.

Stormsong Manor

08:33:13 Ven

All aspects of an image must be credited. Stock images, reference images, everything

Rising Stars Stable

08:32:19 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Ven
The credits are in the bottom left hand corner

Maple Tree Eventing

08:32:08 Lydia <3

I drew it??

Stormsong Manor

08:31:37 Ven

Maple, it's missing credits, as is your stable avatar. You only credited yourself

Maple Tree Eventing

08:30:13 Lydia <3

-HEE Click-

finally got around to making art for this boy <3

Tamarack Mountain

08:29:03 Opal

yes please -HEE Click-

Snow Stable

08:25:51 Snow❆Gem

@AL

Thanks. :) *hugs* I'll just end up a McDonalds or something I'd rather not do. Then keep looking for another job and hopefully switch by the end of the year. :)

Just Chaos

08:24:23 AL

Snow, dont lose hope. You'll get a job :)

Snow Stable

08:23:27 Snow❆Gem

@helix

Ack! I'm struggling to get a joe-smo job. O.o I feel ya.

Minerva

08:19:04 Min

I've had 13,987,475 from quests now. About 80m in total from shows

Tamarack Mountain

08:16:15 Opal

Anna change his training to dressage

hel!x2014

08:15:11 #Vettechnician

@Snow, I have been okay. Struggling to get back into a vet clinic ;-;

Sweet Valley

08:15:07 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-

He looks pretty good I entered in show so we'll see

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Dash and Duchess

08:41:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Canter, unfortunately that's true xD I've been stalking T1 like a hawk now xD

Canterwood Acres

08:40:36 Canter

so many of the art shops are full!

Gemstone Stable

08:39:37 Snow❆Gem

Still in awe that a EWW-W wild RID mare is on the HOTY LB. lol

-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

08:38:41 DD | ~Squizard~

Canter, same xD I need to pamper my new filly for being so good 😭

Canterwood Acres

08:38:02 Canter

speaking of art I need to get some art for my new WWW babies <3

ArcticLights

08:35:38 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Ven, can I ask a potential dumb question?
The hosting site limitations also applies for personal messages?

Maple Tree Eventing

08:34:57 Lydia <3

Ah right, I wasn't exactly sure how I should correctly go about crediting Interstellar for the background. As for the reference, I got the pose from an image I took some years ago.

Stormsong Manor

08:33:13 Ven

All aspects of an image must be credited. Stock images, reference images, everything

Rising Stars Stable

08:32:19 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Ven
The credits are in the bottom left hand corner

Maple Tree Eventing

08:32:08 Lydia <3

I drew it??

Stormsong Manor

08:31:37 Ven

Maple, it's missing credits, as is your stable avatar. You only credited yourself

Maple Tree Eventing

08:30:13 Lydia <3

-HEE Click-

finally got around to making art for this boy <3

Tamarack Mountain

08:29:03 Opal

yes please -HEE Click-

Snow Stable

08:25:51 Snow❆Gem

@AL

Thanks. :) *hugs* I'll just end up a McDonalds or something I'd rather not do. Then keep looking for another job and hopefully switch by the end of the year. :)

Just Chaos

08:24:23 AL

Snow, dont lose hope. You'll get a job :)

Snow Stable

08:23:27 Snow❆Gem

@helix

Ack! I'm struggling to get a joe-smo job. O.o I feel ya.

Minerva

08:19:04 Min

I've had 13,987,475 from quests now. About 80m in total from shows

Tamarack Mountain

08:16:15 Opal

Anna change his training to dressage

hel!x2014

08:15:11 #Vettechnician

@Snow, I have been okay. Struggling to get back into a vet clinic ;-;

Sweet Valley

08:15:07 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-

He looks pretty good I entered in show so we'll see

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Critique please? <3

January 12, 2024 03:41 PM

Passerine Acres

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Don't get me wrong, i LOVE how these turned out. but perhaps that could've clouded my judgement.

I would like some criticism ( be as harsh, nitpicking, even mean as you please ) on my art work, as i feel i've not been improving much as of late and have kind of plateaued in terms of skill

Much love <3

Edit: wonder if it's obvious how much i love back lighting? hehe maybe i should try with other harsh directed lighting

Edited at January 12, 2024 03:43 PM by Passerine Acres

Critique please? <3

January 12, 2024 03:48 PM

Prismatic Cove

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I absolutely love the style. As far as I can see all I would work on is less direct/sharp shadows/reflections, more shading on the horse. I'd do a little browsing at how shadows work for the lighting you do with the piece. The snowy and fight club ones are breathtaking! As are your manes and tails. Keep up the good work!

Critique please? <3

January 12, 2024 07:20 PM

Florestä

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So stunning. I'd just go lighter on the smudging especially on that last piece, a little texture isn't a bad thing, don't be afraid of it ;)

I used to do that (over-smudging) too. they just turn out looking swirly.

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