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Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it
FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci
FirstLightFarms
06:15:48 puck
I think he's just leaning into the 70s/80s themes a lot. Probably he watched Stranger Things and went "wow I wish Steve Harrington could do a backflip" and the label was like "bet"
Tamarack Mountain
06:15:11 Opal
oh look I am 21 I think I will retire -HEE Click-
FirstLightFarms
06:14:43 puck
Oh we're pre capitol we're in the "spiraling rapidly towards fascism" category
ArcticLights
06:13:36 Ceci / (Call me) AL
He makes me think of Village People. Not sure if that is good or bad
Alpine Acres
06:10:55 Lily
puck
Benson Lovers unite!
lol xD
Calela Eventing
06:10:34 Cali
Yep! We're really heading into Capitol territory

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Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it
FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci
FirstLightFarms
06:15:48 puck
I think he's just leaning into the 70s/80s themes a lot. Probably he watched Stranger Things and went "wow I wish Steve Harrington could do a backflip" and the label was like "bet"
Tamarack Mountain
06:15:11 Opal
oh look I am 21 I think I will retire -HEE Click-
FirstLightFarms
06:14:43 puck
Oh we're pre capitol we're in the "spiraling rapidly towards fascism" category
ArcticLights
06:13:36 Ceci / (Call me) AL
He makes me think of Village People. Not sure if that is good or bad
Alpine Acres
06:10:55 Lily
puck
Benson Lovers unite!
lol xD
Calela Eventing
06:10:34 Cali
Yep! We're really heading into Capitol territory

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Art criticism! January 22, 2024 04:21 PM


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Hello, I practiced again today and am now hoping for your opinion and tips! I would like to sell this art at some point, but I want it to be "perfect".
Art criticism! January 22, 2024 04:26 PM


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Art criticism! January 22, 2024 04:34 PM

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Scarecrows Dream said:
Hello, I practiced again today and am now hoping for your opinion and tips! I would like to sell this art at some point, but I want it to be "perfect".


Its great!,Id recommend fixing up some deatails on the skul the skull looks a bit "Bulky",and the antlers need a little more detail but overall great!
Art criticism! January 22, 2024 08:28 PM


Florestä
 
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I disagree, I think the antlers have plenty of detail and don't look bulky to me. But that's just my opinion.

VelociHoof said:
Its great!,Id recommend fixing up some deatails on the skul the skull looks a bit "Bulky",and the antlers need a little more detail but overall great!
Art criticism! January 22, 2024 08:38 PM


E.T. Eventing
 
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I think that the skull looks a little bit hidden and could reach down more to show more parts of the nose area, otherwise gorgeous.
Art criticism! January 22, 2024 08:50 PM


Kiwi Mountains
 
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I think you can see a little bit of the bg to the horse stock just poking out beind the tail lol.
Stunning piece though!
Art criticism! January 22, 2024 08:55 PM


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I am in the car at the moment and tired as hek, but from a quick glance, I would remove these parts to get it a cleaner look <3

It looks brilliant and I so want to snatch it 👀. Keep up the great work, you're doing great 🫶🏽


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