Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Year: 193   Season: Spring   
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The End
11:55:33 Ender
2 for 2 >.>
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Epsilon Acres
11:55:11 Eps
Somebody take my embryos away from me lol
Sweet Valley
11:54:22 Anna/Jewel
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Ouch. Horrible rating, Beautiful Color
Angels angels
11:54:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol
HEE gods said triple W or frame. not both
Epsilon Acres
11:53:29 Eps
Darn 😂
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Eagle Creek
11:52:59 Eagle
Shes all greyed out now
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Angels angels
11:52:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Do it Eps lol
Epsilon Acres
11:52:16 Eps
I’m tempted to yolo breed another frame embryo now out of spite lol
Sweet Valley
11:52:11 Anna/Jewel
I'm about to cry! No horses with even a W in it for me...
😭😭😭😭😭
The Joker
11:51:49 Ari <3
Noo how rude Eps
Black Moon Magic
11:51:34 Mori
Oh she's cute
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Fantasy Horses
11:51:32 Fantasy | Fanta
Bluey's alive!!
ooh blood bays are the best
Blue Diamond
11:50:59 Bluey
I can roll with this....
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Epsilon Acres
11:50:27 Eps
How dare you dodge the frame. That was rude..
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The Joker
11:50:10 Ari <3
Yes, super excited!
Fantasy Horses
11:49:46 Fantasy | Fanta
Ari
That's awesome lol. Both colts, too :P
The Joker
11:48:18 Ari <3
Oop well she likes Stormrage XD
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Fantasy Horses
11:45:37 Fantasy | Fanta
Where is that stinking filly J med???
Fantasy Horses
11:45:13 Fantasy | Fanta
Bug
oooh dark apricot
Bug in a Rug
11:44:40 Bug | Flea | KPH
he looks more chestnut than apricot
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The End
11:55:33 Ender
2 for 2 >.>
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Epsilon Acres
11:55:11 Eps
Somebody take my embryos away from me lol
Sweet Valley
11:54:22 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

Ouch. Horrible rating, Beautiful Color
Angels angels
11:54:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol
HEE gods said triple W or frame. not both
Epsilon Acres
11:53:29 Eps
Darn 😂
-HEE Click-
Eagle Creek
11:52:59 Eagle
Shes all greyed out now
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
11:52:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Do it Eps lol
Epsilon Acres
11:52:16 Eps
I’m tempted to yolo breed another frame embryo now out of spite lol
Sweet Valley
11:52:11 Anna/Jewel
I'm about to cry! No horses with even a W in it for me...
😭😭😭😭😭
The Joker
11:51:49 Ari <3
Noo how rude Eps
Black Moon Magic
11:51:34 Mori
Oh she's cute
-HEE Click-
Fantasy Horses
11:51:32 Fantasy | Fanta
Bluey's alive!!
ooh blood bays are the best
Blue Diamond
11:50:59 Bluey
I can roll with this....
-HEE Click-
Epsilon Acres
11:50:27 Eps
How dare you dodge the frame. That was rude..
-HEE Click-
The Joker
11:50:10 Ari <3
Yes, super excited!
Fantasy Horses
11:49:46 Fantasy | Fanta
Ari
That's awesome lol. Both colts, too :P
The Joker
11:48:18 Ari <3
Oop well she likes Stormrage XD
-HEE Click-
Fantasy Horses
11:45:37 Fantasy | Fanta
Where is that stinking filly J med???
Fantasy Horses
11:45:13 Fantasy | Fanta
Bug
oooh dark apricot
Bug in a Rug
11:44:40 Bug | Flea | KPH
he looks more chestnut than apricot
-HEE Click-

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Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 04:05 AM


Wings Of Glory
 
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So I have no clue what to price my art at...so if you have suggestions on that those could help as well.
I need some critique on my art. Ive been semi stuck lately on art and its been making me sort of depressed.
Recent art pieces:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/f12d/f/2018/187/c/a/deathappearancehorseavi_by_wsl30horselover10-dcghsz1.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/60bd/f/2018/196/f/7/running_free_horse_avi_by_wsl30horselover10-dchbwgy.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/ce47/f/2018/179/1/4/leaning_ladder_chestnut_mare_art_by_wsl30horselover10-dcfofa8.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/758b/f/2018/196/0/d/jello_entry_by_wsl30horselover10-dchceqg.jpg
So those are a few recent pieces and as I said I would like some critique on my art:)
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:39 PM

Former Stable
 
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no idea what to price them at. but i love these. the brindle is my favorite
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:42 PM

Former Stable
 
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I'd say like 15-25k!
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:43 PM

Former Stable
 
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Jeesh, these are gorgeous! Great work! I like all of them a lot personally <3
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:43 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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First off, you've improved a whole lot! Price wise, maybe 15k for horse avatars and 10k for stable sets :)

Some constructive critiques:
I noticed that your manes and tails are a bit stringy, so try using a larger pixel brush, maybe 2-4px. The shadows are also a bit blobby, so try to place them according to the lighting of the piece. If the sun is in the background, the shadow should be in the foreground. Also try blurring the background just a tad to really focus on the horse. Some of the edges on the horses are a bit choppy, so maybe try using a smaller brush to cut them out as well. Minor details are key :)
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:44 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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Lol thats good then because I currently have them at 25k:)

Lazy C Ranch said:
I'd say like 15-25k!


Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:45 PM

Former Stable
 
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1. The spots on this horse look very green and the front left hoof looks like it should be in the flowers, not on top of them

2. Maybe blur the background a bit to put more focus on the horse and make it bigger. Not a lot needs changing with this one, it already looks well put together.

3. Maybe make the glow a little fainter, the spots look a little unnatural but overall very pretty.

4. Personally, I like horses to be on the left or right side, at about 1/3 of the way along a banner, not right in the middle but the horse and the background match well.
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:50 PM


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Arveline Acres said:
First off, you've improved a whole lot! Price wise, maybe 15k for horse avatars and 10k for stable sets :)

Some constructive critiques:
I noticed that your manes and tails are a bit stringy, so try using a larger pixel brush, maybe 2-4px. The shadows are also a bit blobby, so try to place them according to the lighting of the piece. If the sun is in the background, the shadow should be in the foreground. Also try blurring the background just a tad to really focus on the horse. Some of the edges on the horses are a bit choppy, so maybe try using a smaller brush to cut them out as well. Minor details are key :)


Thank you:)
Although I do think the mane and tails thing could be because I use a mouse but I definitely know what you mean.

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