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Wild Wind Stables

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Demon Souls

02:06:42

A few more ebs left to claim

Circle Star TBs

01:39:31 Lily

Peacock KNN gelding for sale, 2k!
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Boulder Creek

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Alpine Acres

12:58:48 Lily/Alpine

Clifftop appy art auction, only one bid so far!
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Tack giveaway
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pandemoniu_m

12:28:33 pheezy

-HEE Click-
1k or less including PPP-PEE combo color mares and EEE gelds

no seniors, just want these guys gone!

Rolling in Hay

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-HEE Click-
Art auction! SB 1k

Shadow Acres

12:00:15 Dori

ISO: 1m upgrade

Wild Wind Stables

11:53:50 Wind

-- Selling--
PEE Silver Roan Grullo Rabicano ISH filly
-HEE Click-
-- Breeding --
Currently 30th for Freshman Appendix Quarter Horse Sires. 5 covers still avalible!
-HEE Click-

lass

11:44:11 Captain America

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Half off all shop items

Watercolored

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January 29, 2023 11:14 AM

ShiningStar Stables

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This is one of my more recent pieces, and I want some critique on it! I really want to improve, so rip it apart!

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January 29, 2023 06:25 PM

Rivendell Steeds

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Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

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January 29, 2023 07:09 PM

SJ_Foundation

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I know some great mane tutorials I can send you if you'd like. I've seen white horses with black hair on this game, I think the mane just has too many strands and not enough movement. I'd love to share the tutorials that helped me. Just PM me!

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January 29, 2023 07:17 PM

Bellbird Estate

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I agree here

Rivendell Steeds said:

Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

also, I would lower the saturation so the horse doesn't have a green hue, since it's standing over ice not grass.

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