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Angels angels
11:15:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Hopefully it comes out good lol
Crestwood Eq.
11:14:42 Ivy / poison ivy
yum
Angels angels
11:11:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Bread is in the oven <3
Crestwood Eq.
11:10:43 Ivy / poison ivy
ok
Lunalovegood
11:09:54 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy, PM me so I don’t forget :)
Lunalovegood
11:08:39 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy gotta go
Chat later?
Crestwood Eq.
11:08:29 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

yes you did. they are in my tummy now
Glacier Bay Cove
11:08:17 Arctic Katz
Did I hear mushrooms
Crestwood Eq.
11:08:03 Ivy / poison ivy
??
Glacier Bay Cove
11:07:51 Arctic Katz
Banana bread with blueberries
Crestwood Eq.
11:06:15 Ivy / poison ivy
loonila loony tune??
Crestwood Eq.
11:05:28 Ivy / poison ivy
i have finished my lunch
MakeEm Fancy
11:05:21 Ally 💜
Yes it's delicious
Pegasus Lane
11:05:06 Peggy (or) Peg
I can't stand eating bananas 😭
Sleepwalker Centre
11:04:25 Walker
banana coffee??
Nightingales Ridge
11:04:22 Issy
My partner is so quick I bought 2 bunches the other day and there's only 1 left
MakeEm Fancy
11:04:13 Ally 💜
Also love making homemade banana coffee 😍
MakeEm Fancy
11:03:46 Ally 💜
I love banana muffins
Sleepwalker Centre
11:03:17 Walker
That why you freeze the brown/black ones, then you always have bananas ready for bread!
Imperial Warmbloods
11:02:21 Imp/Impie/Impy
I love banana bread, :o

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Angels angels
11:15:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Hopefully it comes out good lol
Crestwood Eq.
11:14:42 Ivy / poison ivy
yum
Angels angels
11:11:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Bread is in the oven <3
Crestwood Eq.
11:10:43 Ivy / poison ivy
ok
Lunalovegood
11:09:54 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy, PM me so I don’t forget :)
Lunalovegood
11:08:39 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivy gotta go
Chat later?
Crestwood Eq.
11:08:29 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

yes you did. they are in my tummy now
Glacier Bay Cove
11:08:17 Arctic Katz
Did I hear mushrooms
Crestwood Eq.
11:08:03 Ivy / poison ivy
??
Glacier Bay Cove
11:07:51 Arctic Katz
Banana bread with blueberries
Crestwood Eq.
11:06:15 Ivy / poison ivy
loonila loony tune??
Crestwood Eq.
11:05:28 Ivy / poison ivy
i have finished my lunch
MakeEm Fancy
11:05:21 Ally 💜
Yes it's delicious
Pegasus Lane
11:05:06 Peggy (or) Peg
I can't stand eating bananas 😭
Sleepwalker Centre
11:04:25 Walker
banana coffee??
Nightingales Ridge
11:04:22 Issy
My partner is so quick I bought 2 bunches the other day and there's only 1 left
MakeEm Fancy
11:04:13 Ally 💜
Also love making homemade banana coffee 😍
MakeEm Fancy
11:03:46 Ally 💜
I love banana muffins
Sleepwalker Centre
11:03:17 Walker
That why you freeze the brown/black ones, then you always have bananas ready for bread!
Imperial Warmbloods
11:02:21 Imp/Impie/Impy
I love banana bread, :o

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Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:24 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zt8M.jpg

I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:29 AM


Flipperruby30
 
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done!
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:47 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:53 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)



Thank you! This helps a lot.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:45 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:49 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)



Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:53 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Mhmm, haha =)

I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:56 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:06 PM

Former Stable
 
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:08 PM


Casanova
 
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like.

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