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Fluffy's Cosy Home
07:24:43 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
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I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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Angels angels
07:17:13 Will Buy Brindles!!
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WWW dun X mare no sabino! Will lower, accept ttades, or payment plans!
Green Creek Stables
06:56:14 GC
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EE combos for under 3k
starmutt
06:53:39 happy pride! :3
ISO upgrade :3 -HEE Click-
Potatoz
06:37:58 
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WEE 1/10 Stallion for 50k!
very pretty!
FirstLightFarms
05:52:18 puck
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WEE TB Auction. Includes Dun Tobi filly. Ends TONIGHT
Pegasus Lane
05:45:11 Peggy (or) Peg
Desperately ISO an upgrade
ZequineZ
05:35:35 ZEZ - ZZ
Clear out auction! Im switching to X and a lot of my other stock has to go

A mix of SH, ISH and PON, and others.
Includes an unbred brindle mare and a load of PEE-EEE mares for auction
Ends on Tuesday
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Galloping_Gems
05:24:00 Gemstone
Under 15,500k for the W horses
Galloping_Gems
05:20:54 Gemstone
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3 W horses for sale along with 9 other EE and EEE horses

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Fluffy's Cosy Home
07:24:43 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
07:17:13 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
WWW dun X mare no sabino! Will lower, accept ttades, or payment plans!
Green Creek Stables
06:56:14 GC
-HEE Click-
EE combos for under 3k
starmutt
06:53:39 happy pride! :3
ISO upgrade :3 -HEE Click-
Potatoz
06:37:58 
-HEE Click-
WEE 1/10 Stallion for 50k!
very pretty!
FirstLightFarms
05:52:18 puck
-HEE Click-

WEE TB Auction. Includes Dun Tobi filly. Ends TONIGHT
Pegasus Lane
05:45:11 Peggy (or) Peg
Desperately ISO an upgrade
ZequineZ
05:35:35 ZEZ - ZZ
Clear out auction! Im switching to X and a lot of my other stock has to go

A mix of SH, ISH and PON, and others.
Includes an unbred brindle mare and a load of PEE-EEE mares for auction
Ends on Tuesday
-HEE Click-
Galloping_Gems
05:24:00 Gemstone
Under 15,500k for the W horses
Galloping_Gems
05:20:54 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
3 W horses for sale along with 9 other EE and EEE horses

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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