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Roz is amazing. <3
https://i.postimg.cc/xTvHPVYd/N-E-W.jpg
So, I can use some critique for my recent horse avatar. <3 |
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Lazy Duck Elites said:
Roz is amazing. <3
https://i.postimg.cc/xTvHPVYd/N-E-W.jpg
So, I can use some critique for my recent horse avatar. <3
That's gorgeous! Maybe you could make the background a bit darker so the horse could pop a bit more! |
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Lazy Duck
Looks great! The horse blends into the sky a lot though, so I agree with darkening the background a little. Also, adding little lighter/darker lines in spots where the horse is blending to the background makes it more separated while keeping a natural look. I'd do some of that in your image. |
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I use Photoshop, but I'm very amateur, thank you! :)
Trillium Acres said:
Sunset Grove Farm said:
The app I use is really annoying when it comes to quality, I'm sadly unable to do anything about it :/But the Rest is extremely helpful, thank you for the tips :D
No problem!
Balefire Stables said:
Awesome idea, Roz! :)
https://i.postimg.cc/XN2Y7b3p/Bally-HEE-Manip-Spring.png
Here's my latest. Looking to auction it off, idk. Any price pointers or areas for improvement? I know it's not great LOL
I really like this also, very cute :3
All looks well on this. Lovely lighting, hair looks fine, highlighting is good (you could possibly add a bit throughout the torso and flank. optional). The only thing I notice about this one is that it is a bit blurry around the horse. It looks like a program fault, not yours. What program do you use?
Edit: I would price around 25-45k if you can fix the blur lines (not the blurred background) around the horse. Maybe 15k if you can't fix?
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Just starting and would love critique https://i.postimg.cc/WzSC6X39/My-Drawing-30-300x300.jpg Edited at October 6, 2019 05:26 PM by White Forest Farms |
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Balefire Stables said:
I use Photoshop, but I'm very amateur, thank you! :)
Trillium Acres said:
Sunset Grove Farm said:
The app I use is really annoying when it comes to quality, I'm sadly unable to do anything about it :/But the Rest is extremely helpful, thank you for the tips :D
No problem!
Balefire Stables said:
Awesome idea, Roz! :)
https://i.postimg.cc/XN2Y7b3p/Bally-HEE-Manip-Spring.png
Here's my latest. Looking to auction it off, idk. Any price pointers or areas for improvement? I know it's not great LOL
I really like this also, very cute :3
All looks well on this. Lovely lighting, hair looks fine, highlighting is good (you could possibly add a bit throughout the torso and flank. optional). The only thing I notice about this one is that it is a bit blurry around the horse. It looks like a program fault, not yours. What program do you use?
Edit: I would price around 25-45k if you can fix the blur lines (not the blurred background) around the horse. Maybe 15k if you can't fix?
Oh! I use PS too ;) Yeah... I have no clue about the weird blurry line thing... PS shouldn't do that. Maybe play around with your blur/fx settings and see what he issue is? I dunno haah!
Lazy Duck Elites said:
Roz is amazing. <3
https://i.postimg.cc/xTvHPVYd/N-E-W.jpg
So, I can use some critique for my recent horse avatar. <3
Aww, Ari. You da bestest <3
Ok so first off- this is drop dead gorgeous *-* It is honestly my absolute favorite piece you have ever done! But if I had to nit-pick, I would add that the background and horse blend in together a bit. I agree with Grey and Anime where you should maybe darken the background a bit. Possibly add a VERY pastel blue or yellow (those are my go-to colors as you can tell lol) to the background instead of that warm white you have. Hope this helps! <3
I would love to have added more but I have got to get some sleep haha! |
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Sunset Grove Farm said:
Wow this is very kind of you :)Reminds me when a bunch of the tier 1 (it was before the tiers but anyways) made a critique thread where only designated people could critique on that certain thread
https://i.postimg.cc/zG8RMdPS/Untitled268.jpg
Could you try this one please
Hey Sunset, your work has improved a lot with this image. YouÂ’re really growing as an artist :) I am going to mention as Roz said that the horse does look grainy. If you could smudge it possibly I think it will make it a lot smoother over all. The next step IÂ’d suggest to take with this is make the lighting a lot more dramatic. With evening scenes you can make the lighting a lot more dramatic. IÂ’d give a halo around the horse particularly the head area to highlight it and then push the rump and rest of the body in shadows. As Roz also said a hard rim light around the outside of the horse would really make it pop and differentiate from the background. With my pieces I only highlight areas of the horse I want viewers to see and focus on. Something to keep in mind. Also apply the lighting to the mane to make it unify with the overall picture. Also some pink on the nose as Roz has already said again. Overall a really nice piece you should be proud :D |
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Trillium Acres said:
Sunset Grove Farm said:
The app I use is really annoying when it comes to quality, I'm sadly unable to do anything about it :/But the Rest is extremely helpful, thank you for the tips :D
No problem!
Balefire Stables said:
Awesome idea, Roz! :)
https://i.postimg.cc/XN2Y7b3p/Bally-HEE-Manip-Spring.png
Here's my latest. Looking to auction it off, idk. Any price pointers or areas for improvement? I know it's not great LOL
I really like this also, very cute :3
All looks well on this. Lovely lighting, hair looks fine, highlighting is good (you could possibly add a bit throughout the torso and flank. optional). The only thing I notice about this one is that it is a bit blurry around the horse. It looks like a program fault, not yours. What program do you use?
Edit: I would price around 25-45k if you can fix the blur lines (not the blurred background) around the horse. Maybe 15k if you can't fix?
To add to that,because of the light direction,the two butterfly's need a shadow |
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Balefire Stables said:
I use Photoshop, but I'm very amateur, thank you! :)
Trillium Acres said:
Sunset Grove Farm said:
The app I use is really annoying when it comes to quality, I'm sadly unable to do anything about it :/But the Rest is extremely helpful, thank you for the tips :D
No problem!
Balefire Stables said:
Awesome idea, Roz! :)
https://i.postimg.cc/XN2Y7b3p/Bally-HEE-Manip-Spring.png
Here's my latest. Looking to auction it off, idk. Any price pointers or areas for improvement? I know it's not great LOL
I really like this also, very cute :3
All looks well on this. Lovely lighting, hair looks fine, highlighting is good (you could possibly add a bit throughout the torso and flank. optional). The only thing I notice about this one is that it is a bit blurry around the horse. It looks like a program fault, not yours. What program do you use?
Edit: I would price around 25-45k if you can fix the blur lines (not the blurred background) around the horse. Maybe 15k if you can't fix?
The blur line is because you left the horse on the original background from the stock image. You need to put your horses on new backgrounds.
And for the future, do remember that most stock providers dont allow their images to be used in just hue changes. You will need to make noticeable modifications, such as changing the background, to comply with stock rules. |
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