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Frog Judgment Acers

09:15:59 Dulcie/Crazy

Wk 2s for my WWWs
Fingers crossed for the next 2 wks!

Faith Meadow

09:13:52 Spirit,pony

Cinch- well you can Pm Rp on you mail box or on forums there is a rp section and you can do a sign up role-play or if you have someone like a 1x1 role-play you can go to 1x1 page

It's A Cinch

09:11:54

I just have one question... how do yall rp on here... like ik over-chat but like-

Faith Meadow

09:10:33 Spirit,pony

Anyone want to role-playing with me Pm me I am trying to be active on here

Glacier Bay Cove

09:07:39 Arctic Katz

I have to be careful because I don't tan, I burn in the sun

Glacier Bay Cove

09:07:09 Arctic Katz

*Doing the happy dance, I almost have enough Ebs for another barn

Lynx Glory

09:04:01 ⛈ whisper/lynx

Currently very tan as well since I've been camping at a beach for the last few days

Lynx Glory

09:03:16 ⛈ whisper/lynx

I've never sunburned lol. I just get super tan :p

MakeEm Fancy

09:03:01 Ally 💜

I have a random tan line on my leg but dont tan anywhere else 🤣

Dash and Duchess

09:02:15 DD | ~Squizard~

Angel, same here 🥲 the most 'tan I get' is light pasty before I peel xD

Angels angels

08:57:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

When I was younger I would burn like crazy, peel, then be white as a ghost again lol

Sforzando

08:56:56

everyone in my immediate family has skin cancer since we're all super sensitive to the sun so ive given up, i only wear long sleeves and pants now lol not risking it

Fantasy Horses

08:56:47 Fantasy | Fanta

Thanks for the help everyone!

MakeEm Fancy

08:56:28 Ally 💜

I burn so bad unfortunately :/

Angels angels

08:55:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I have been redder than a lobster before but I thankfully never got blisters from a sun burn. Now that I am older I don't even burn anymore it just goes tan lol

MakeEm Fancy

08:45:31 Ally 💜

Well had. My last one popped today

MakeEm Fancy

08:44:56 Ally 💜

Yeah I have blisters on my chest.

Glacier Bay Cove

08:44:26 Arctic Katz

Oh ouchie sunburn

MakeEm Fancy

08:43:59 Ally 💜

Im peeling so bad 😅

Arctic Dusk

08:43:27 AL - Hateful RIDs

Its also the part that a www stallion pretty much only brings in income if he is good enough for breeding

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Frog Judgment Acers

09:15:59 Dulcie/Crazy

Wk 2s for my WWWs
Fingers crossed for the next 2 wks!

Faith Meadow

09:13:52 Spirit,pony

Cinch- well you can Pm Rp on you mail box or on forums there is a rp section and you can do a sign up role-play or if you have someone like a 1x1 role-play you can go to 1x1 page

It's A Cinch

09:11:54

I just have one question... how do yall rp on here... like ik over-chat but like-

Faith Meadow

09:10:33 Spirit,pony

Anyone want to role-playing with me Pm me I am trying to be active on here

Glacier Bay Cove

09:07:39 Arctic Katz

I have to be careful because I don't tan, I burn in the sun

Glacier Bay Cove

09:07:09 Arctic Katz

*Doing the happy dance, I almost have enough Ebs for another barn

Lynx Glory

09:04:01 ⛈ whisper/lynx

Currently very tan as well since I've been camping at a beach for the last few days

Lynx Glory

09:03:16 ⛈ whisper/lynx

I've never sunburned lol. I just get super tan :p

MakeEm Fancy

09:03:01 Ally 💜

I have a random tan line on my leg but dont tan anywhere else 🤣

Dash and Duchess

09:02:15 DD | ~Squizard~

Angel, same here 🥲 the most 'tan I get' is light pasty before I peel xD

Angels angels

08:57:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

When I was younger I would burn like crazy, peel, then be white as a ghost again lol

Sforzando

08:56:56

everyone in my immediate family has skin cancer since we're all super sensitive to the sun so ive given up, i only wear long sleeves and pants now lol not risking it

Fantasy Horses

08:56:47 Fantasy | Fanta

Thanks for the help everyone!

MakeEm Fancy

08:56:28 Ally 💜

I burn so bad unfortunately :/

Angels angels

08:55:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I have been redder than a lobster before but I thankfully never got blisters from a sun burn. Now that I am older I don't even burn anymore it just goes tan lol

MakeEm Fancy

08:45:31 Ally 💜

Well had. My last one popped today

MakeEm Fancy

08:44:56 Ally 💜

Yeah I have blisters on my chest.

Glacier Bay Cove

08:44:26 Arctic Katz

Oh ouchie sunburn

MakeEm Fancy

08:43:59 Ally 💜

Im peeling so bad 😅

Arctic Dusk

08:43:27 AL - Hateful RIDs

Its also the part that a www stallion pretty much only brings in income if he is good enough for breeding

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February 15, 2020 05:35 AM

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Breezie Rose said:

I'm quite proud of this, and I'm really liking my hair technique, but I wanna know if there's more I can do to get better.

This image doesn't have credits because this is the finished piece before resizing and adding credits. (Finished piece with credits isn't as clear, but I'll post it as well so ya'll know they're there.)

That's stunning!

The only thing I could say is maybe make the back a bit of a lighter colour as there is a light shining from above?

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February 15, 2020 05:35 AM

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Looking for some critique on this please :)

Edited at February 15, 2020 05:36 AM by Oak valley

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February 15, 2020 11:03 AM

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Edited at February 18, 2020 09:51 PM by Amhain Dull Liath

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February 15, 2020 11:23 AM

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Oak valley said:

Looking for some critique on this please :)

Highlight some of the outline, heavily, like front of legs, face and back

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February 16, 2020 04:31 PM

Moonglade Manor

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Oak valley said:

Looking for some critique on this please :)

I will start off saying that this is gorgeous,

but what i immediately notice is the necklace looks off, if the necklace was on top of the mane, it should have some shadows around it and more effects to make it look like its leaning on the mane. I would consider removing the part that goes on top of thee mane so it looks like they mane is on top of the necklace. and with the hooves, it almost looks like they are sinking into the ground, they look a bit too blurred and nearly seem like they aren't there at all.

Edited at February 16, 2020 04:32 PM by Moonglade Manor

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February 18, 2020 08:38 PM

SilverFern Stables

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Made this for a contest, and I'm super happy with it, but would love to have a critique and/or pricing help.

Heres alos some exmaples of a cut set/about us:

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Banner 1. Banner 2.

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February 18, 2020 08:49 PM

Caprina Springs

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I have 2 things:

1) I think in the banners, either some of the butterflies need to be moved down and be visible, or the head of the foal needs to be more visible. But other than the cuts are great!

2) I personally think those back hooves should be slightly darker thant the front because the foals shadow would be over them in that type of lighting portrayed. But that really is the only things I have to say, other than that, wonderful work! <3