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January 29, 2023 11:14 AM

ShiningStar Stables

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This is one of my more recent pieces, and I want some critique on it! I really want to improve, so rip it apart!

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January 29, 2023 06:25 PM

Rivendell Steeds

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Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

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January 29, 2023 07:09 PM

SJ_Foundation

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I know some great mane tutorials I can send you if you'd like. I've seen white horses with black hair on this game, I think the mane just has too many strands and not enough movement. I'd love to share the tutorials that helped me. Just PM me!

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January 29, 2023 07:17 PM

Bellbird Estate

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I agree here

Rivendell Steeds said:

Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

also, I would lower the saturation so the horse doesn't have a green hue, since it's standing over ice not grass.

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