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A pretty Golden Bay EEE foundation Thoroughbred mare.
Could be good to test out your WWW stallion.
$5'000
she is also genetic tested.

09:57:50 Bluey

Mv glass in my shop for 80k

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WEE AA Colt for sale! 70k, open to offers

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Clifftop Appy art auction :)
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WWW 1/6 mare available for brood or embryos 194
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09:05:50 Amb

Sold out already lol \/

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3 month upgrades for sale
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Green Creek Stables

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WWE/WEE/EEE and 1 of 9 color
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Glacier Bay Cove

09:03:10 Arctic Katz

Would anyone be interested in a stained glass horse or a couple of maps

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10:05:09

-HEE Click-
A pretty Golden Bay EEE foundation Thoroughbred mare.
Could be good to test out your WWW stallion.
$5'000
she is also genetic tested.

09:57:50 Bluey

Mv glass in my shop for 80k

09:48:48

WEE AA Colt for sale! 70k, open to offers

-HEE Click-

09:47:05 Lily/Alpine

Clifftop Appy art auction :)
-HEE Click-

09:21:54 Jessie

WWW 1/6 mare available for brood or embryos 194
-HEE Click-

09:05:50 Amb

Sold out already lol \/

09:03:47 Amb

3 month upgrades for sale
170k
Send ebs and I'll send the upgrade.

Green Creek Stables

09:03:24 GC

WWE/WEE/EEE and 1 of 9 color
Available in this auction!
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

09:03:10 Arctic Katz

Would anyone be interested in a stained glass horse or a couple of maps

Painted Performance

08:53:35

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2k start all PEE+

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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