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rocknroad TBs
05:11:37 Monty, Cookie Monste
-HEE Click-
Vecchia Modo
05:11:10 Vecc - TBs
cool for the visitors, a shit ton of work for us.
LOL
Mythological
05:09:07 Crowley
Vecc
That would have been cool
Sunset River Arabian
05:06:12 Athena - AAs
This +spd?
-HEE Click-
Or this +scp?
-HEE Click-
Narran Park
05:02:12 Sting
court!
Vecchia Modo
04:53:35 Vecc - TBs
Myth - I swear, at one point in time, I could have opened a darn petting zoo, we had so many animals on the place.
Stone Haven Farm
04:50:35 Court
-HEE Click- bruh lol
Mythological
04:46:37 Crowley
Lol
Vecchia Modo
04:45:44 Vecc - TBs
He 'found' an approx. 6 month old Turken one time, and kept calling it his pet Vulture. He was 8 at the time, and wouldn't accept the fact it wasn't a Vulture.
Kids...
Mythological
04:45:04 Crowley
Vecc
Beverly Hillbillies hehe
Vecchia Modo
04:43:01 Vecc - TBs
Yea, kid had a habit of bringing home all kinds of little wild critters. lol
Mythological
04:36:12 Crowley
Vecc
Ooph
Vecchia Modo
04:33:12 Vecc - TBs
Myth - things went well, until the coon came of age (almost 2 yrs old).
Then his personality changed, and not for the better. Became very unmanageable.
BlackRose
04:33:09 Stella
I know, every time I try to get it out or something it vanishes and appears when I’ve forgotten about it
Mythological
04:32:01 Crowley
Moths will eat your clothes...
BlackRose
04:31:29 Stella
I’ve somehow got a pet moth who keeps doing fly bys in my face
Mythological
04:30:54 Crowley
Vecc
OML would probably be about like taming a porcupine 💀
Vecchia Modo
04:29:56 Vecc - TBs
Is he ? interesting
BlackRose
04:29:28 Stella
Vecc your son is a legend lol
Mythological
04:29:18 Crowley
Lo
His chain is tangled up

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rocknroad TBs
05:11:37 Monty, Cookie Monste
-HEE Click-
Vecchia Modo
05:11:10 Vecc - TBs
cool for the visitors, a shit ton of work for us.
LOL
Mythological
05:09:07 Crowley
Vecc
That would have been cool
Sunset River Arabian
05:06:12 Athena - AAs
This +spd?
-HEE Click-
Or this +scp?
-HEE Click-
Narran Park
05:02:12 Sting
court!
Vecchia Modo
04:53:35 Vecc - TBs
Myth - I swear, at one point in time, I could have opened a darn petting zoo, we had so many animals on the place.
Stone Haven Farm
04:50:35 Court
-HEE Click- bruh lol
Mythological
04:46:37 Crowley
Lol
Vecchia Modo
04:45:44 Vecc - TBs
He 'found' an approx. 6 month old Turken one time, and kept calling it his pet Vulture. He was 8 at the time, and wouldn't accept the fact it wasn't a Vulture.
Kids...
Mythological
04:45:04 Crowley
Vecc
Beverly Hillbillies hehe
Vecchia Modo
04:43:01 Vecc - TBs
Yea, kid had a habit of bringing home all kinds of little wild critters. lol
Mythological
04:36:12 Crowley
Vecc
Ooph
Vecchia Modo
04:33:12 Vecc - TBs
Myth - things went well, until the coon came of age (almost 2 yrs old).
Then his personality changed, and not for the better. Became very unmanageable.
BlackRose
04:33:09 Stella
I know, every time I try to get it out or something it vanishes and appears when I’ve forgotten about it
Mythological
04:32:01 Crowley
Moths will eat your clothes...
BlackRose
04:31:29 Stella
I’ve somehow got a pet moth who keeps doing fly bys in my face
Mythological
04:30:54 Crowley
Vecc
OML would probably be about like taming a porcupine 💀
Vecchia Modo
04:29:56 Vecc - TBs
Is he ? interesting
BlackRose
04:29:28 Stella
Vecc your son is a legend lol
Mythological
04:29:18 Crowley
Lo
His chain is tangled up

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


Sagamore Farms
 
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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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