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Peachy
07:57:50 peach | abbi
i hear that. i'm in the backstretch of my shift now - ready for the weekend xD ready for RO too, want it to be here already haha
Glacier Bay Cove
07:57:40 Arctic Katz
After I finish my latest painting, I would like to paint some of your horses, Angels, if that's okay with you of course
Angels angels
07:56:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Good just tired. Work was insane today
You?
Peachy
07:55:54 peach | abbi
how are you :D
Angels angels
07:55:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Hi peach :)
Peachy
07:54:57 peach | abbi
hey angel!
Glacier Bay Cove
07:54:40 Arctic Katz
There is a forum for artists
Blue Wolf Ranch
07:54:33 Bison | Blue
Angels - I know, it'll be for my in real life pets that have passed away. Little memorial stuff you know?
Glacier Bay Cove
07:54:16 Arctic Katz
I clicked on them and didn't see the art pieces
Angels angels
07:53:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Anna
You can't post art shops in main
Sweet Valley
07:52:08 Anna
My new art shop 😁

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I am soo excited 😁😁
Angels angels
07:50:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Careful though memorial gardens are 100% permanent. There is no way to convert them back, sell them, or delete them
Blue Wolf Ranch
07:43:19 Bison | Blue
Thanks Lynx!
Lynx Glory
07:40:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx
bison
buy a pasture, then convert it by viewing the pasture, scrolling down, and converting into memorial garden
Blue Wolf Ranch
07:38:21 Bison | Blue
Where do we buy a memorial garden?
Cadence Farms
07:37:10 evebot
It gives you another grouping for your pastures. It's free to make so you can experiment. :)
BlackRose
07:25:52 Stella
What is build pasterland?
Afterglow
07:22:28 Tobi's AA
That is a crazy wk3 :o
Imperial Warmbloods
07:14:49 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ Bluey
That week 3 is crazy- xd
Blue Diamond
07:12:27 Bluey
How's her training look?
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Peachy
07:57:50 peach | abbi
i hear that. i'm in the backstretch of my shift now - ready for the weekend xD ready for RO too, want it to be here already haha
Glacier Bay Cove
07:57:40 Arctic Katz
After I finish my latest painting, I would like to paint some of your horses, Angels, if that's okay with you of course
Angels angels
07:56:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Good just tired. Work was insane today
You?
Peachy
07:55:54 peach | abbi
how are you :D
Angels angels
07:55:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Hi peach :)
Peachy
07:54:57 peach | abbi
hey angel!
Glacier Bay Cove
07:54:40 Arctic Katz
There is a forum for artists
Blue Wolf Ranch
07:54:33 Bison | Blue
Angels - I know, it'll be for my in real life pets that have passed away. Little memorial stuff you know?
Glacier Bay Cove
07:54:16 Arctic Katz
I clicked on them and didn't see the art pieces
Angels angels
07:53:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Anna
You can't post art shops in main
Sweet Valley
07:52:08 Anna
My new art shop 😁

-HEE Click-

I am soo excited 😁😁
Angels angels
07:50:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Careful though memorial gardens are 100% permanent. There is no way to convert them back, sell them, or delete them
Blue Wolf Ranch
07:43:19 Bison | Blue
Thanks Lynx!
Lynx Glory
07:40:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx
bison
buy a pasture, then convert it by viewing the pasture, scrolling down, and converting into memorial garden
Blue Wolf Ranch
07:38:21 Bison | Blue
Where do we buy a memorial garden?
Cadence Farms
07:37:10 evebot
It gives you another grouping for your pastures. It's free to make so you can experiment. :)
BlackRose
07:25:52 Stella
What is build pasterland?
Afterglow
07:22:28 Tobi's AA
That is a crazy wk3 :o
Imperial Warmbloods
07:14:49 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ Bluey
That week 3 is crazy- xd
Blue Diamond
07:12:27 Bluey
How's her training look?
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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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