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 MakeEm Fancy
09:08:47 Ally 💜
Oh thats good to know! I have chronic headaches so that will be helpful @Bird
MakeEm Fancy
09:08:13 Ally 💜
Im getting my knees done. I have a stress fracture on my right knee @Trigger
Hummingbird Meadows
09:08:08 Bird
@Ally, I've heard you can have earplugs or headphones.
MakeEm Fancy
09:07:37 Ally 💜
I think I will be calm I think its going to be the noise thats going to make me insane. If its anything like a CT scan I can tough it out but the noise gets to me @Bird
Wraithcry Farm
09:07:05 Trigger 🐾
I honestly think it was an 45-an hour. I had my back done.
Hummingbird Meadows
09:05:21 Bird
@Ally, maybe ask for meds to help calm you.
Wraithcry Farm
09:04:16 Trigger 🐾
Right?

I worked for the school then, I work for the state now. My insurance is much better now but STILL.

I ended up asking the people on the end of the claims phone if they even knew what jumping a horse entailed out of frustration.
MakeEm Fancy
09:03:53 Ally 💜
How long did you have to stay still? My doctor said 45 minutes and Im not sure if I can do that XD
Hummingbird Meadows
09:03:42 Bird
Wow, just got a notification I have been awarded a $3,000 scholarship. I am surprised to say the least considering my program said I should drop out and pursue a different career!
Wraithcry Farm
09:03:01 Trigger 🐾
Mine was so scary but I really am claustrophobic + I have ADHD so being completely still that long was an absolute challenge.
MakeEm Fancy
09:02:46 Ally 💜
How is that not a good reason? Good grief >.>
MakeEm Fancy
09:00:47 Ally 💜
I havent had an MRI before. I have had 2 X rays both for my knees. It seems to always be the knees
Wraithcry Farm
09:00:15 Trigger 🐾
I should know. I paid for the one I received while I was in the ER because I guess falling from a horse while jumping it is not a legitimate reason to get an xray. Who knew 🤷‍♀️
Wraithcry Farm
08:58:23 Trigger 🐾
MRIs are expensive.

But so are XRays
MakeEm Fancy
08:57:42 Ally 💜
Literally insane and so im a little hesitant if they are going to accept the MRI which is what I need
Wraithcry Farm
08:56:27 Trigger 🐾
Oh that is insane.
Bluegrass Racing
08:56:11 Blue
Not surprised by the rating but still, couldnt try a little harder. Always a bit sad when they are 1o1.

-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:56:00 Ally 💜
Wasnt not wants...stupid phone
Wraithcry Farm
08:55:51 Trigger 🐾
I take 2 different kinds, one in the morning and one at night
The morning one is Celecoxib
The nighttime is Gabapentin
MakeEm Fancy
08:55:38 Ally 💜
If you want something ridiculous...my insurance said my epidural wants pregnancy related and refused to pay for it. I literally fought them for months before they dropped it

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 MakeEm Fancy
09:08:47 Ally 💜
Oh thats good to know! I have chronic headaches so that will be helpful @Bird
MakeEm Fancy
09:08:13 Ally 💜
Im getting my knees done. I have a stress fracture on my right knee @Trigger
Hummingbird Meadows
09:08:08 Bird
@Ally, I've heard you can have earplugs or headphones.
MakeEm Fancy
09:07:37 Ally 💜
I think I will be calm I think its going to be the noise thats going to make me insane. If its anything like a CT scan I can tough it out but the noise gets to me @Bird
Wraithcry Farm
09:07:05 Trigger 🐾
I honestly think it was an 45-an hour. I had my back done.
Hummingbird Meadows
09:05:21 Bird
@Ally, maybe ask for meds to help calm you.
Wraithcry Farm
09:04:16 Trigger 🐾
Right?

I worked for the school then, I work for the state now. My insurance is much better now but STILL.

I ended up asking the people on the end of the claims phone if they even knew what jumping a horse entailed out of frustration.
MakeEm Fancy
09:03:53 Ally 💜
How long did you have to stay still? My doctor said 45 minutes and Im not sure if I can do that XD
Hummingbird Meadows
09:03:42 Bird
Wow, just got a notification I have been awarded a $3,000 scholarship. I am surprised to say the least considering my program said I should drop out and pursue a different career!
Wraithcry Farm
09:03:01 Trigger 🐾
Mine was so scary but I really am claustrophobic + I have ADHD so being completely still that long was an absolute challenge.
MakeEm Fancy
09:02:46 Ally 💜
How is that not a good reason? Good grief >.>
MakeEm Fancy
09:00:47 Ally 💜
I havent had an MRI before. I have had 2 X rays both for my knees. It seems to always be the knees
Wraithcry Farm
09:00:15 Trigger 🐾
I should know. I paid for the one I received while I was in the ER because I guess falling from a horse while jumping it is not a legitimate reason to get an xray. Who knew 🤷‍♀️
Wraithcry Farm
08:58:23 Trigger 🐾
MRIs are expensive.

But so are XRays
MakeEm Fancy
08:57:42 Ally 💜
Literally insane and so im a little hesitant if they are going to accept the MRI which is what I need
Wraithcry Farm
08:56:27 Trigger 🐾
Oh that is insane.
Bluegrass Racing
08:56:11 Blue
Not surprised by the rating but still, couldnt try a little harder. Always a bit sad when they are 1o1.

-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:56:00 Ally 💜
Wasnt not wants...stupid phone
Wraithcry Farm
08:55:51 Trigger 🐾
I take 2 different kinds, one in the morning and one at night
The morning one is Celecoxib
The nighttime is Gabapentin
MakeEm Fancy
08:55:38 Ally 💜
If you want something ridiculous...my insurance said my epidural wants pregnancy related and refused to pay for it. I literally fought them for months before they dropped it

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


 Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


 Sagamore Farms
 
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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


 Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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