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I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :) |
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done! |
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.
My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :) |
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.
My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Thank you! This helps a lot. |
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol
Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D
Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)
1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD
2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^
Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =) |
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol
Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D
Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)
1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD
2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^
Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though. |
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Mhmm, haha =)
I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x) |
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD |
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing |
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like. |
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