Horse Eden : Critiques ?

11:04:22 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Lmao

11:03:34 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I helped a man skydive today, he was kindve annoying. I went to go grab my sandwich from my backpack and found a parachute...hope he was hungry

pandemoniu_m

11:02:40 pheezy

a pair? in this economy?

11:02:09 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I figured out that a kidnappers prefered shoe is a pair of white Vans

KPH Equestrian

11:01:30 Rapcoon | Jester

lmao fern
my dad texted me earlier that his brother is in the hospital with heart troubles. It's okay though we don't like that one so much

CWY country

11:01:10 C

Sunni, that sounds delicious.

Fern, XD lol.

pandemoniu_m

11:01:02 pheezy

sunni i will give you all the cash in my wallet for one of those peppers..

11:00:07 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I texted my dad earlier and said: 'did you hear about the murder commited by like...reese w something?' he said: witherspoon?' i replied : 'no, with a knife'

KPH Equestrian

10:59:53 Rapcoon | Jester

there'd be no better mime, he'd grow famous for his skills, and then I'd abandon him and start a new life throwing eggs from the tops of tall buildings at the unsuspecting targets below

Sunni

10:59:18 Sunni bunny

I know one thing I am hungry as a dog that ain't ate in a week.
I am making bacon wrapped jalapeno peppers.

pandemoniu_m

10:58:55 pheezy

"wow this mime's acting is next level! wish he'd stop making that weird yelp sound though.. 6/10"

Mochi~

10:58:31

Lmao I guess that's true

Sunni

10:58:18 Sunni bunny

I am back sorry hahaha, was hanging out with my dad.

10:58:01 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

"Theyd be like :

pandemoniu_m

10:57:46 pheezy

thats the only way to test a mime's integrity for their practice

KPH Equestrian

10:57:06 Rapcoon | Jester

no think about it, I'd make their act 10x better

Mochi~

10:56:42

What did the mimes do to you lol

Glacier Bay Cove

10:56:42 Arctic Katz

*tomorrow, I will be sneaking into barns, and snatching brindle horses, lol* Too tired to do anything like that right now

KPH Equestrian

10:55:53 Rapcoon | Jester

*beat

KPH Equestrian

10:55:48 Rapcoon | Jester

If I ever gained invisibility powers, the first thing I would do is best up a mime

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11:04:22 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Lmao

11:03:34 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I helped a man skydive today, he was kindve annoying. I went to go grab my sandwich from my backpack and found a parachute...hope he was hungry

pandemoniu_m

11:02:40 pheezy

a pair? in this economy?

11:02:09 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I figured out that a kidnappers prefered shoe is a pair of white Vans

KPH Equestrian

11:01:30 Rapcoon | Jester

lmao fern
my dad texted me earlier that his brother is in the hospital with heart troubles. It's okay though we don't like that one so much

CWY country

11:01:10 C

Sunni, that sounds delicious.

Fern, XD lol.

pandemoniu_m

11:01:02 pheezy

sunni i will give you all the cash in my wallet for one of those peppers..

11:00:07 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I texted my dad earlier and said: 'did you hear about the murder commited by like...reese w something?' he said: witherspoon?' i replied : 'no, with a knife'

KPH Equestrian

10:59:53 Rapcoon | Jester

there'd be no better mime, he'd grow famous for his skills, and then I'd abandon him and start a new life throwing eggs from the tops of tall buildings at the unsuspecting targets below

Sunni

10:59:18 Sunni bunny

I know one thing I am hungry as a dog that ain't ate in a week.
I am making bacon wrapped jalapeno peppers.

pandemoniu_m

10:58:55 pheezy

"wow this mime's acting is next level! wish he'd stop making that weird yelp sound though.. 6/10"

Mochi~

10:58:31

Lmao I guess that's true

Sunni

10:58:18 Sunni bunny

I am back sorry hahaha, was hanging out with my dad.

10:58:01 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

"Theyd be like :

pandemoniu_m

10:57:46 pheezy

thats the only way to test a mime's integrity for their practice

KPH Equestrian

10:57:06 Rapcoon | Jester

no think about it, I'd make their act 10x better

Mochi~

10:56:42

What did the mimes do to you lol

Glacier Bay Cove

10:56:42 Arctic Katz

*tomorrow, I will be sneaking into barns, and snatching brindle horses, lol* Too tired to do anything like that right now

KPH Equestrian

10:55:53 Rapcoon | Jester

*beat

KPH Equestrian

10:55:48 Rapcoon | Jester

If I ever gained invisibility powers, the first thing I would do is best up a mime

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March 8, 2019 01:51 PM

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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=18394455

This was the first ever manip I did ;w;

Here is the second piece I did.

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=18126229

I'm proud of the first one but the second one could definitely be better in my opinion

some tips in the right direction and critiques would be greatly appreciated !

March 8, 2019 01:55 PM

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Your manes and tails are great, however try blending the feet into the ground more :D

March 8, 2019 01:56 PM

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Golden Meadows said:
Your manes and tails are great, however try blending the feet into the ground more :D

Thanks for the tip, i'll try that ~

March 8, 2019 02:02 PM

WildWillow

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Be sure not to forget shadows. :)

March 8, 2019 02:04 PM

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WildWillow said:
Be sure not to forget shadows. :)

Oh yes , I shan't forget next time

March 8, 2019 02:10 PM

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The tips you've got are a good starting place, I'd second them! Just personal preference, I think you could shrink the credits a bit more so they don't take attention away from the horse.

March 8, 2019 02:12 PM