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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Sunset River Arabian

02:56:14 Athena - AAs

wait no I want to keep the cute stripey hooves I did and tobi would ruin that. I guess minimal sabino it is

Sunset River Arabian

02:53:35 Athena - AAs

I'll combine them xD thanks

02:50:48 Rapcoon | Jester

athena
this one if it's not too complex ^^
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02:50:41 Ally 💜

@Athena
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02:48:01 Fantasy

Congrats Alex!

Sunset River Arabian

02:47:47 Athena - AAs

either works

Ace Of Hearts Ranch

02:47:37 Ace

Athena
Irl or on here?

Sunset River Arabian

02:47:15 Athena - AAs

any have a random horse marking for me? I need photo reference

Wisteria Run Farm

02:45:10 Solar/Ria

Love this girl :D
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Ace Of Hearts Ranch

02:44:31 Ace

WHAT?!
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Sunni

02:32:06 Sunni bunny

My lawnmower just died on me xc
Can I just get a break and something work for once.
It's turning over but not catching.

Gem Queens Estate

02:24:00 Snow❆Gem

I have to go now, see-yas!

I hope everyone has a good day!

Gem Queens Estate

02:23:24 Snow❆Gem

@ally

XD

02:22:05 Ally

Thank you! The hard work was worth it! I couldn't have done it without my support system, but it does feel good!

02:21:02

Congrats Ally!🥳

02:19:24 Snow❆Gem

@ally

*high fives*

02:18:49 Ally

Just got my undergraduate dissertation results...95, I have no idea how that happened, but my god, I couldn't be happier!

Ellsworths Eden

02:18:46

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I love her. :D

02:18:26 Snow❆Gem

@jester
@willow

Oh! Yes, she has creme. :)

02:17:39 Stalker of Chat

Oop too slow XD

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Sunset River Arabian

02:56:14 Athena - AAs

wait no I want to keep the cute stripey hooves I did and tobi would ruin that. I guess minimal sabino it is

Sunset River Arabian

02:53:35 Athena - AAs

I'll combine them xD thanks

02:50:48 Rapcoon | Jester

athena
this one if it's not too complex ^^
-HEE Click-

02:50:41 Ally 💜

@Athena
-Click-

02:48:01 Fantasy

Congrats Alex!

Sunset River Arabian

02:47:47 Athena - AAs

either works

Ace Of Hearts Ranch

02:47:37 Ace

Athena
Irl or on here?

Sunset River Arabian

02:47:15 Athena - AAs

any have a random horse marking for me? I need photo reference

Wisteria Run Farm

02:45:10 Solar/Ria

Love this girl :D
-HEE Click-

Ace Of Hearts Ranch

02:44:31 Ace

WHAT?!
-HEE Click-

Sunni

02:32:06 Sunni bunny

My lawnmower just died on me xc
Can I just get a break and something work for once.
It's turning over but not catching.

Gem Queens Estate

02:24:00 Snow❆Gem

I have to go now, see-yas!

I hope everyone has a good day!

Gem Queens Estate

02:23:24 Snow❆Gem

@ally

XD

02:22:05 Ally

Thank you! The hard work was worth it! I couldn't have done it without my support system, but it does feel good!

02:21:02

Congrats Ally!🥳

02:19:24 Snow❆Gem

@ally

*high fives*

02:18:49 Ally

Just got my undergraduate dissertation results...95, I have no idea how that happened, but my god, I couldn't be happier!

Ellsworths Eden

02:18:46

-HEE Click-

I love her. :D

02:18:26 Snow❆Gem

@jester
@willow

Oh! Yes, she has creme. :)

02:17:39 Stalker of Chat

Oop too slow XD

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

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#85834
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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#85971
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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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#86095
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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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#86100
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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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#86137
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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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#86141
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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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#86265
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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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