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 Port Royal Equines
09:52:11 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
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(I)SH straws! EWW+, Bravery, and retired ABLB.

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New chonk set at auction!

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EEE+ mares at brood. 4k. Some are w producers!
Indiana Peaches
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Must See TB Auction!
EEP-WEE Dun, Splash, Tobi, Silver, prl
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pandemoniu_m
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Blueberry Ledge
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Brindles
Chimera
Manchados
Sootys
Peacock Appys!
The Lazy Ninja
09:29:21 Jessie
Wild EEE WB 1/10 seal brown with Tobi and splash 20k
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Alaskan Anchor
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LBKL
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Looking for some Jasmine, PM me if you are willing to!
BlueBirdFalls
09:13:19 Blu
BBF Haver EWW KNN
All 20 Lc open to the public! Proven Wc producer, Always starts on the LBs! Would do really well with a decent mare!
up for 1k
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Angels angels
09:10:04 Will Buy Brindles!!
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EWE PON mare
EWE PON Filly
WWE AA filly (5/6 up wk 4)
EWE combo TB fillies
Insignia Elites
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Sexed Embryo - Filly
and Rusty Bits in the shop!
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 Port Royal Equines
09:52:11 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
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(I)SH straws! EWW+, Bravery, and retired ABLB.

-HEE Click-
New chonk set at auction!

-HEE Click-
EEE+ mares at brood. 4k. Some are w producers!
Indiana Peaches
09:45:00 Indi
Must See TB Auction!
EEP-WEE Dun, Splash, Tobi, Silver, prl
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
09:40:33 pheezy
-HEE Click-
Blueberry Ledge
09:40:08 
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Brindles
Chimera
Manchados
Sootys
Peacock Appys!
The Lazy Ninja
09:29:21 Jessie
Wild EEE WB 1/10 seal brown with Tobi and splash 20k
-HEE Click-
Alaskan Anchor
09:28:00 
Auction ends in 2 hrs 30 mins

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LBKL
09:20:24 
Looking for some Jasmine, PM me if you are willing to!
BlueBirdFalls
09:13:19 Blu
BBF Haver EWW KNN
All 20 Lc open to the public! Proven Wc producer, Always starts on the LBs! Would do really well with a decent mare!
up for 1k
-HEE Click-
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Broods:
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Sales:
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Angels angels
09:10:04 Will Buy Brindles!!
Pm me of you are interested in:
EWE PON mare
EWE PON Filly
WWE AA filly (5/6 up wk 4)
EWE combo TB fillies
Insignia Elites
08:48:20 Em
Sexed Embryo - Filly
and Rusty Bits in the shop!
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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

 Former Stable
 
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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