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Dreamcatcher Farms
09:21:38 
You're pretty
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Sunni
09:14:40 Sunni bunny
Just the regular kind of pepperoni,
Glacier Bay Cove
09:11:21 Arctic Katz
What kind of pepperoni
Sunni
09:09:49 Sunni bunny
I order a pineapple pizza, I got pepperoni.
Blue Sky Equestrian
08:53:12 Aris/Quinn
i agree, she is pretty
Acacia Riding Center
08:51:34 
winteria- I think she is beautiful the way she is imo
Acacia Riding Center
08:51:01 
Quinn, I always name my horses after songs/bands/lyrics I like. That makes things much easier!
Lynx, too late lol. I learned the hard way!
winteria
08:50:26 
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I've been resisting rerolling her just in case she turns ugly >.>
Blue Sky Equestrian
08:49:35 Aris/Quinn
anyone wanna help me name horses because im really indecisive? :D
Lynx Glory
08:45:47 ⛈ whisper/lynx
acacia
I wouldn't, not sure what more you can get out of Gold champagne. most of the time i would reroll if the horse has a bit more colour and patterns
Blue Sky Equestrian
08:43:26 Aris/Quinn
i would
Acacia Riding Center
08:42:54 
should I reroll? -HEE Click-
Lynx Glory
08:42:06 ⛈ whisper/lynx
its not a meme but it sounds funny xD
Lynx Glory
08:41:46 ⛈ whisper/lynx
- where did my potatoes go
Dreamcatcher Farms
08:41:37 
- I kinda look like beyonce?
- my cabbages
-Peanut butter jellytime
Lynx Glory
08:39:28 ⛈ whisper/lynx
dreamcatcher xD
Sunfeather Stables
08:39:21 SF
-Its An Avocado Wey
-Hurricane Tortilla
-Is That A Weed
-And They Were Roommates
- It's Wednesday, My Dude
- 5 Feet Apart
- Burger King Foot Lettuce

From vines off the top of my head :P
Lynx Glory
08:39:15 ⛈ whisper/lynx
elysium
i love that
Dreamcatcher Farms
08:39:01 
i took them sorry
Elysium Opalus
08:38:52 anti gen ai
Why is Bro Tweaking became an OC and has his own art now lol

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Dreamcatcher Farms
09:21:38 
You're pretty
-HEE Click-
Sunni
09:14:40 Sunni bunny
Just the regular kind of pepperoni,
Glacier Bay Cove
09:11:21 Arctic Katz
What kind of pepperoni
Sunni
09:09:49 Sunni bunny
I order a pineapple pizza, I got pepperoni.
Blue Sky Equestrian
08:53:12 Aris/Quinn
i agree, she is pretty
Acacia Riding Center
08:51:34 
winteria- I think she is beautiful the way she is imo
Acacia Riding Center
08:51:01 
Quinn, I always name my horses after songs/bands/lyrics I like. That makes things much easier!
Lynx, too late lol. I learned the hard way!
winteria
08:50:26 
-HEE Click-
I've been resisting rerolling her just in case she turns ugly >.>
Blue Sky Equestrian
08:49:35 Aris/Quinn
anyone wanna help me name horses because im really indecisive? :D
Lynx Glory
08:45:47 ⛈ whisper/lynx
acacia
I wouldn't, not sure what more you can get out of Gold champagne. most of the time i would reroll if the horse has a bit more colour and patterns
Blue Sky Equestrian
08:43:26 Aris/Quinn
i would
Acacia Riding Center
08:42:54 
should I reroll? -HEE Click-
Lynx Glory
08:42:06 ⛈ whisper/lynx
its not a meme but it sounds funny xD
Lynx Glory
08:41:46 ⛈ whisper/lynx
- where did my potatoes go
Dreamcatcher Farms
08:41:37 
- I kinda look like beyonce?
- my cabbages
-Peanut butter jellytime
Lynx Glory
08:39:28 ⛈ whisper/lynx
dreamcatcher xD
Sunfeather Stables
08:39:21 SF
-Its An Avocado Wey
-Hurricane Tortilla
-Is That A Weed
-And They Were Roommates
- It's Wednesday, My Dude
- 5 Feet Apart
- Burger King Foot Lettuce

From vines off the top of my head :P
Lynx Glory
08:39:15 ⛈ whisper/lynx
elysium
i love that
Dreamcatcher Farms
08:39:01 
i took them sorry
Elysium Opalus
08:38:52 anti gen ai
Why is Bro Tweaking became an OC and has his own art now lol

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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