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FirstLightFarms
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WEE TB mare auction. Dun, silver, tobi, and splash!

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EWW RID Mare for auction! SB 1k.
Bioshock Manor
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Geldings. All levels in my last 3 barns. 1k per level. Need the room
Palais de Lys
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WWW-E RID freshie.
HC STUD
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MakeEm Fancy
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EE+ wild KNN mares. Maps used
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Minerva
03:42:02 Min
Put some WWW X WWW embryos into store! 300k each!

Includes #2 PONLB X #47 PONLB (WWW-E mare, already produced WWW)
*Show Master*
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Level 7 geldings up for sale in my barns. I need space so please have a look if you need to add some geldings to your show team. Also have a gelding auction going on.
Wacka do
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EEE filly up for sale:

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Maco Stables
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Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 01:51 PM

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This is my latest. I actually smudged it! And I think it turned out good BUT that is just me. If you think there is anything that would have made this better/ you would change PLEASE (!) let me know!


Edited at March 14, 2018 01:51 PM by Ruby Quater Horses
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 01:54 PM

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You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 01:56 PM

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Trinity Equine said:
You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

Thank you! Will remember all that an the next one! xD
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 02:00 PM

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The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 02:07 PM

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Midnight storm Arce said:
The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

OK thank you!

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