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Ceffyldorf
11:41:58 katy | distant
-HEE Click-
still can't believe i bred this guy. now to try for a WWW xD
KPH Equestrian
11:20:35 Rapcoon | Jester
sunni
horse avis are 500x500, stable avis are 300x300 :)
Tobiano Lady
11:19:58 Tobi | Nix
300x300 Sunni :)
Sunni
11:18:38 Sunni bunny
Remind me because am being stupid what's the size of an avatar again?
I thought it was 500x500
Skyward Stud
11:05:59 Skrangle
still can't believe my luck -HEE Click-
Tobiano Lady
11:04:15 Tobi | Nix
Congrats Eagle!
Eagles Peak
11:03:13 
um i think this is my first all up week 4 lol -HEE Click-
Hummingbird Meadows
11:01:30 Bird
Argh, I'm trying to decide if I need to take Finley To the vet because his stool seems to be soft all the time.
Eagles Peak
11:00:16 
Is there a way to donate ebs to a club?
Skyward Stud
10:57:53 Skrangle
I had no idea that eyes could be heterochromatic in this game!
ZequineZ
10:37:18 ZEZ - ZZ
I feel like brass is one of those ones that needs soldering but I’ve never looked much into plumbing myself, definitely YouTube it at the least I reckon
Galloping_Gems
10:25:13 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
The pretty ones always rate shitty 😭
Galloping_Gems
10:22:44 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Just caught this girl a hour ago
Cloud Peak Stables
10:06:05 Cloud
A 2-3 in dia. brass main line is a pretty major pipe to be fixing. You're better off asking a plumber (or maybe Youtube? lol) for that one.
Hummingbird Meadows
10:05:59 Bird
@Dulcie, sounds like a job for a plumber.
Frog Judgment Acers
09:59:11 Dulcie/Crazy
Anyone on know about pipe fixing?
The main coming into the shared vacation cabin broke because it was left on over the winter by a relative
I think its like 2 or 3 inches & brass
Im planning to go up there soon & fix it but need to know what tools to bring
Tobiano Lady
09:52:17 Tobi | Nix
I'm glad you got something out of it as well!
Cloud Peak Stables
09:52:16 Cloud
And I'm happy to help with my own studs too <3 Bummer that my freebie straw was a color dud.
Cloud Peak Stables
09:49:22 Cloud
Of course <3 Glacialis looked promising and I loved his color. He not only landed high on the LB but he gave me lots of pretty foals too :)
Tobiano Lady
09:47:14 Tobi | Nix
*my studs & other people's studs. Should have clarified lol

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Ceffyldorf
11:41:58 katy | distant
-HEE Click-
still can't believe i bred this guy. now to try for a WWW xD
KPH Equestrian
11:20:35 Rapcoon | Jester
sunni
horse avis are 500x500, stable avis are 300x300 :)
Tobiano Lady
11:19:58 Tobi | Nix
300x300 Sunni :)
Sunni
11:18:38 Sunni bunny
Remind me because am being stupid what's the size of an avatar again?
I thought it was 500x500
Skyward Stud
11:05:59 Skrangle
still can't believe my luck -HEE Click-
Tobiano Lady
11:04:15 Tobi | Nix
Congrats Eagle!
Eagles Peak
11:03:13 
um i think this is my first all up week 4 lol -HEE Click-
Hummingbird Meadows
11:01:30 Bird
Argh, I'm trying to decide if I need to take Finley To the vet because his stool seems to be soft all the time.
Eagles Peak
11:00:16 
Is there a way to donate ebs to a club?
Skyward Stud
10:57:53 Skrangle
I had no idea that eyes could be heterochromatic in this game!
ZequineZ
10:37:18 ZEZ - ZZ
I feel like brass is one of those ones that needs soldering but I’ve never looked much into plumbing myself, definitely YouTube it at the least I reckon
Galloping_Gems
10:25:13 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
The pretty ones always rate shitty 😭
Galloping_Gems
10:22:44 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Just caught this girl a hour ago
Cloud Peak Stables
10:06:05 Cloud
A 2-3 in dia. brass main line is a pretty major pipe to be fixing. You're better off asking a plumber (or maybe Youtube? lol) for that one.
Hummingbird Meadows
10:05:59 Bird
@Dulcie, sounds like a job for a plumber.
Frog Judgment Acers
09:59:11 Dulcie/Crazy
Anyone on know about pipe fixing?
The main coming into the shared vacation cabin broke because it was left on over the winter by a relative
I think its like 2 or 3 inches & brass
Im planning to go up there soon & fix it but need to know what tools to bring
Tobiano Lady
09:52:17 Tobi | Nix
I'm glad you got something out of it as well!
Cloud Peak Stables
09:52:16 Cloud
And I'm happy to help with my own studs too <3 Bummer that my freebie straw was a color dud.
Cloud Peak Stables
09:49:22 Cloud
Of course <3 Glacialis looked promising and I loved his color. He not only landed high on the LB but he gave me lots of pretty foals too :)
Tobiano Lady
09:47:14 Tobi | Nix
*my studs & other people's studs. Should have clarified lol

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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