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Painted View Ranch
11:53:06 PVR Paint/Painted
Oh wow! Came out ok?
Mythological
11:52:16 Crowley
Paint
For about a week we thought a dog was gonna die.
Sport Pony Island
11:51:55 
Thanks :)
Mythological
11:51:28 Crowley
Matches are for planning out which horses you want to breed together.
Painted View Ranch
11:51:09 PVR Paint/Painted
Thanks Sport Pony! I worked hard on putting it together.

Im very glad you are feeling better! Myth
Glacier Bay Cove
11:50:59 Arctic Katz
The matches are for better horse ratings, or for better horse colours
Sport Pony Island
11:50:05 
Can anyone clarify, what are the matches for? I just don't get it.. Like my friends are always: "You should do some matches". But i don't get what they are for
Mythological
11:49:09 Crowley
Paint
Better than I have been recently.
Sport Pony Island
11:48:09 
Oh okay :) It's really pretty though :D
Painted View Ranch
11:47:59 PVR Paint/Painted
I'm good Myth how about you
Painted View Ranch
11:47:42 PVR Paint/Painted
I made it and you would have to ask the stock owner. to use them. Thank you. Sport Pony
Sport Pony Island
11:46:08 
I know, i paint like on canva's, like with real paint, i wanna draw that..
Painted View Ranch
11:45:54 PVR Paint/Painted
Hey Ally, you donated the mare in trivia one night and I won her. Here she is and check her foal out this year,
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
Mythological
11:45:16 Crowley
Sport Pony
That's art nsomeone made...
Enoki Valley
11:44:28 Enoki | Maddie
Which seems better?
-HEE Click-
Or
-HEE Click-
Mythological
11:44:09 Crowley
How are you, Paint?
Sport Pony Island
11:44:05 
Paint, i love your avatar photo, could i use it as a painting reference?
Painted View Ranch
11:43:34 PVR Paint/Painted
Hi myth
Sport Pony Island
11:42:25 
Ally, i baked crumbl cookies with chocolate, and they turned out so good :) I wish i could share them with you guys
Mythological
11:41:37 Crowley
Hey Paint

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Painted View Ranch
11:53:06 PVR Paint/Painted
Oh wow! Came out ok?
Mythological
11:52:16 Crowley
Paint
For about a week we thought a dog was gonna die.
Sport Pony Island
11:51:55 
Thanks :)
Mythological
11:51:28 Crowley
Matches are for planning out which horses you want to breed together.
Painted View Ranch
11:51:09 PVR Paint/Painted
Thanks Sport Pony! I worked hard on putting it together.

Im very glad you are feeling better! Myth
Glacier Bay Cove
11:50:59 Arctic Katz
The matches are for better horse ratings, or for better horse colours
Sport Pony Island
11:50:05 
Can anyone clarify, what are the matches for? I just don't get it.. Like my friends are always: "You should do some matches". But i don't get what they are for
Mythological
11:49:09 Crowley
Paint
Better than I have been recently.
Sport Pony Island
11:48:09 
Oh okay :) It's really pretty though :D
Painted View Ranch
11:47:59 PVR Paint/Painted
I'm good Myth how about you
Painted View Ranch
11:47:42 PVR Paint/Painted
I made it and you would have to ask the stock owner. to use them. Thank you. Sport Pony
Sport Pony Island
11:46:08 
I know, i paint like on canva's, like with real paint, i wanna draw that..
Painted View Ranch
11:45:54 PVR Paint/Painted
Hey Ally, you donated the mare in trivia one night and I won her. Here she is and check her foal out this year,
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
Mythological
11:45:16 Crowley
Sport Pony
That's art nsomeone made...
Enoki Valley
11:44:28 Enoki | Maddie
Which seems better?
-HEE Click-
Or
-HEE Click-
Mythological
11:44:09 Crowley
How are you, Paint?
Sport Pony Island
11:44:05 
Paint, i love your avatar photo, could i use it as a painting reference?
Painted View Ranch
11:43:34 PVR Paint/Painted
Hi myth
Sport Pony Island
11:42:25 
Ally, i baked crumbl cookies with chocolate, and they turned out so good :) I wish i could share them with you guys
Mythological
11:41:37 Crowley
Hey Paint

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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