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Second Chance Ranch

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Rancho Redondo

01:10:03 Trini

AUCTION. TB Rated Color Fillies and Mares 200 sb (for most of them lol)
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TB Well Rated Color Studs and Upcoming Studs to Watch for Next Season!! 500 EBS No Breeding Reqs!!
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Fluffy's Cosy Home

01:02:05 Fluffy

Auction:
*World Class
*EEE
*PEE combo
*Colour
*Chimera
*Rares
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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Broadway

12:47:52

ISO upgrade! PM me <3

Angel Haven

12:43:01 Hay Hay

Sugar cubes wanted, PM me if you want to give away

Whispering Wood Barn

12:30:31 ~Whispy~

193 WWW TBLB
-HEE Click-

193 WWW TB
-HEE Click-

My fellow color breeders, I am looking for new blood :) ISO:
-HEE Click-

Iso: sven gnome

Horse Haven Stables

12:25:47 HHS⎹ Lyla

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EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)

MakeEm Fancy

12:17:32 Ally 💜

EWW chimera RID filly
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Second Chance Ranch

11:50:10

Selling all of my RIDS, come get them before RO!

Foal Me Once Farms

11:38:12 Roan🦋⃤

Shop filled with random goodies!

Sherpa maps & more!!!

All proceedings go to savings!

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EEE AA 3k obo
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January 29, 2023 11:14 AM

ShiningStar Stables

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This is one of my more recent pieces, and I want some critique on it! I really want to improve, so rip it apart!

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January 29, 2023 06:25 PM

Rivendell Steeds

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Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

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January 29, 2023 07:09 PM

SJ_Foundation

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I know some great mane tutorials I can send you if you'd like. I've seen white horses with black hair on this game, I think the mane just has too many strands and not enough movement. I'd love to share the tutorials that helped me. Just PM me!

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January 29, 2023 07:17 PM

Bellbird Estate

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I agree here

Rivendell Steeds said:

Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

also, I would lower the saturation so the horse doesn't have a green hue, since it's standing over ice not grass.

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