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MC Ace
06:40:20 McFossil
Geez. 9 years old and finally hit the LB.

-HEE Click-
Sunni
06:30:11 Sunni bunny
If you wanna talk are need someone feel free to message me.
I cried a lot with snow, I still cry thinking about her.
Sunni
06:28:54 Sunni bunny
Blue, that's all ways the scariest and the hardest part.
16 years old for a dog is really good.
Bluebonnet Estates
06:22:11 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Sunni
Honestly it helps a bit more than you think <3
He got Sarcoma at 13 and the cancer specialist told us with the rate it was going, and it being near a nerve, he probably had 6 months tops before it reached the nerve and paralyzed his left side. It ended up going into remission suddenly but just came back in May unfortunately
Sunni
06:21:07 Sunni bunny
Id love to see them cove, also awww.
My neighbor cat was named little mama, because she was all ways having kittens.
I use to get off the school bus and call her.
You could say I basically stole their cat XD.
she has a litter of kittens in our house once.
My mom was freaking out trying to hide it from me.
I ended up adopting one of her kitten's.
MakeEm Fancy
06:20:41 Ally 💜
I have a black lab mix <3 he is the best baby
Glacier Bay Cove
06:20:00 Arctic Katz
My younger sister has a black lab
Glacier Bay Cove
06:18:58 Arctic Katz
I will have to upload a picture of them sometime
Insignia Elites
06:18:36 Em
I had 2 dogs who have passed. Both labs that lived for 14 and 16 years. My cat was the most recent who loved for 19 years.
Glacier Bay Cove
06:18:10 Arctic Katz
CRYING, I miss my Pansy and Ivy girls
Glacier Bay Cove
06:17:27 Arctic Katz
While my siblings and I were children, we had a sheltie and outdoor cats.
Sunni
06:16:39 Sunni bunny
I had 4 love birds and 6 parakeets.
I miss having birds.
Sunni
06:15:52 Sunni bunny
Cove, we had a lot of pets growing up. I wasn't a dog lover until my family got snow.
After that I loved dogs.
I've said goodbye to a lot of pets
Glacier Bay Cove
06:13:34 Arctic Katz
My first two cats were around 3-4 years old when I lost them. They were my babies
Glacier Bay Cove
06:12:37 Arctic Katz
Sunni, that's sad
Glacier Bay Cove
06:12:23 Arctic Katz
My mailbox is also open. I know what it's like to lose an animal
Sunni
06:11:11 Sunni bunny
Blue, I know it probably won't help any.
But we had a dog named snow when I was growing up.
She has bone cancer.
She was only 10 or 13 years old.
It hurts, and it will hurt for a while.
If you ever need someone to talk to about it feel free to message me.
I know what you're going through right now.
Snow was a great Pyrenees.
Glacier Bay Cove
06:10:53 Arctic Katz
And other problems that our best friend animals have
Glacier Bay Cove
06:10:13 Arctic Katz
I hate cancer
Bluebonnet Estates
06:07:50 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Sorry. Testing a new uploader, didn't know it would post all the links individually

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MC Ace
06:40:20 McFossil
Geez. 9 years old and finally hit the LB.

-HEE Click-
Sunni
06:30:11 Sunni bunny
If you wanna talk are need someone feel free to message me.
I cried a lot with snow, I still cry thinking about her.
Sunni
06:28:54 Sunni bunny
Blue, that's all ways the scariest and the hardest part.
16 years old for a dog is really good.
Bluebonnet Estates
06:22:11 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Sunni
Honestly it helps a bit more than you think <3
He got Sarcoma at 13 and the cancer specialist told us with the rate it was going, and it being near a nerve, he probably had 6 months tops before it reached the nerve and paralyzed his left side. It ended up going into remission suddenly but just came back in May unfortunately
Sunni
06:21:07 Sunni bunny
Id love to see them cove, also awww.
My neighbor cat was named little mama, because she was all ways having kittens.
I use to get off the school bus and call her.
You could say I basically stole their cat XD.
she has a litter of kittens in our house once.
My mom was freaking out trying to hide it from me.
I ended up adopting one of her kitten's.
MakeEm Fancy
06:20:41 Ally 💜
I have a black lab mix <3 he is the best baby
Glacier Bay Cove
06:20:00 Arctic Katz
My younger sister has a black lab
Glacier Bay Cove
06:18:58 Arctic Katz
I will have to upload a picture of them sometime
Insignia Elites
06:18:36 Em
I had 2 dogs who have passed. Both labs that lived for 14 and 16 years. My cat was the most recent who loved for 19 years.
Glacier Bay Cove
06:18:10 Arctic Katz
CRYING, I miss my Pansy and Ivy girls
Glacier Bay Cove
06:17:27 Arctic Katz
While my siblings and I were children, we had a sheltie and outdoor cats.
Sunni
06:16:39 Sunni bunny
I had 4 love birds and 6 parakeets.
I miss having birds.
Sunni
06:15:52 Sunni bunny
Cove, we had a lot of pets growing up. I wasn't a dog lover until my family got snow.
After that I loved dogs.
I've said goodbye to a lot of pets
Glacier Bay Cove
06:13:34 Arctic Katz
My first two cats were around 3-4 years old when I lost them. They were my babies
Glacier Bay Cove
06:12:37 Arctic Katz
Sunni, that's sad
Glacier Bay Cove
06:12:23 Arctic Katz
My mailbox is also open. I know what it's like to lose an animal
Sunni
06:11:11 Sunni bunny
Blue, I know it probably won't help any.
But we had a dog named snow when I was growing up.
She has bone cancer.
She was only 10 or 13 years old.
It hurts, and it will hurt for a while.
If you ever need someone to talk to about it feel free to message me.
I know what you're going through right now.
Snow was a great Pyrenees.
Glacier Bay Cove
06:10:53 Arctic Katz
And other problems that our best friend animals have
Glacier Bay Cove
06:10:13 Arctic Katz
I hate cancer
Bluebonnet Estates
06:07:50 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Sorry. Testing a new uploader, didn't know it would post all the links individually

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


Sagamore Farms
 
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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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