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Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
😂 I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it
FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci
FirstLightFarms
06:15:48 puck
I think he's just leaning into the 70s/80s themes a lot. Probably he watched Stranger Things and went "wow I wish Steve Harrington could do a backflip" and the label was like "bet"
Tamarack Mountain
06:15:11 Opal
oh look I am 21 I think I will retire -HEE Click-
FirstLightFarms
06:14:43 puck
Oh we're pre capitol we're in the "spiraling rapidly towards fascism" category
ArcticLights
06:13:36 Ceci / (Call me) AL
He makes me think of Village People. Not sure if that is good or bad

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Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
😂 I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it
FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci
FirstLightFarms
06:15:48 puck
I think he's just leaning into the 70s/80s themes a lot. Probably he watched Stranger Things and went "wow I wish Steve Harrington could do a backflip" and the label was like "bet"
Tamarack Mountain
06:15:11 Opal
oh look I am 21 I think I will retire -HEE Click-
FirstLightFarms
06:14:43 puck
Oh we're pre capitol we're in the "spiraling rapidly towards fascism" category
ArcticLights
06:13:36 Ceci / (Call me) AL
He makes me think of Village People. Not sure if that is good or bad

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Critique? November 30, 2017 11:11 PM


Diamanté
 
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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968
Critique? December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

Former Stable
 
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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.
My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.
Overall nicely done
Critique? December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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