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Midnight Manors
10:50:35 Bunny ♡
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Grand S Stable
10:26:32 Sare-uh
A lot of well trained gelds/mares only 900 ebs. Perfect for showing.
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Port Royal Equines
10:22:23 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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194 EWW shiny broods available.

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ABLB Vieux Dunnit straw thread is open! Multi WWW producing sire.

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Promising grullo splash freshman. He will need testing Y194. Get your straws here!

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PPP+ brave mares at auction. Only a few hours left to bid!
Sarahs Stables
10:17:47 Saje
Wanting to start herd over. Selling a lot at cheap prices! Lowering prices today.
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Skyrim
09:49:01 Wynter/Ghostly
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WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 250k. Multiple EEE and EWE producer. I'm willing to take 200k if asked.
Angels angels
09:43:47 Will Buy Brindles!!
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DaisyMeadowEventing
09:38:01 Daisy/ DM♡
PEE-WWW
Need gone, open to offers!
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Alpine Acres
09:27:23 Lily/Alpine
A few horses for sale for 0! Free range fodder for anyone who needs it
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God is Mighty Stable
09:25:21 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
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WEE COMBO Mares & Colts
DragonFyre Estate
09:17:29 Whip
WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
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WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
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EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
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Midnight Manors
10:50:35 Bunny ♡
Open
-HEE Click-
Grand S Stable
10:26:32 Sare-uh
A lot of well trained gelds/mares only 900 ebs. Perfect for showing.
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
10:22:23 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
194 EWW shiny broods available.

-HEE Click-
ABLB Vieux Dunnit straw thread is open! Multi WWW producing sire.

-HEE Click-
Promising grullo splash freshman. He will need testing Y194. Get your straws here!

-HEE Click-
PPP+ brave mares at auction. Only a few hours left to bid!
Sarahs Stables
10:17:47 Saje
Wanting to start herd over. Selling a lot at cheap prices! Lowering prices today.
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Skyrim
09:49:01 Wynter/Ghostly
-HEE Click-
WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 250k. Multiple EEE and EWE producer. I'm willing to take 200k if asked.
Angels angels
09:43:47 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
DaisyMeadowEventing
09:38:01 Daisy/ DM♡
PEE-WWW
Need gone, open to offers!
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
09:27:23 Lily/Alpine
A few horses for sale for 0! Free range fodder for anyone who needs it
-HEE Click-
God is Mighty Stable
09:25:21 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
WEE COMBO Mares & Colts
DragonFyre Estate
09:17:29 Whip
WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
-HEE Click-
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
-HEE Click-
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
-HEE Click-
Make offers before I start FRing on RO. PM me to discuss.

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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