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mildspicyfood
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Neverhof Palace
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DragonFyre Estate
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WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
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WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
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EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
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God is Mighty Stable
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Minnie TB
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W bravery EEE TB mare! Unbred this year, has produced PWW previously when randomly thrown at an EWW.
KPH Equestrian
03:30:15 Jake From State Farm
Need gone!
-Unrated bravery bred 2-3yos!
-Includes a few wild W brave mares
100eb start
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Minnie RID
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Sleepwalker Centre
05:04:34 Walker
Check out my studs!! WB mostly, some other breeds in there too. -HEE Click-
mildspicyfood
04:56:17 
ANY ADULT WWW MARES? LF SPORT HORSE MARES !!
Black Meadow Estate
04:53:42 Meadow
-HEE Click-
Items for sale all cheap
Neverhof Palace
04:46:33 
EEW ISH Stallion Auction
Starting at 10k!
-HEE Click-
Bermuda Triangle
04:32:38 Lost
Random auction
EEE+ , brindle, chimera.
-HEE Click-

Www mare sale
-HEE Click-
DragonFyre Estate
04:25:02 Whip
WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
-HEE Click-
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
-HEE Click-
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
-HEE Click-
Make offers before I start FRing on RO. PM me to discuss.
God is Mighty Stable
04:11:55 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
Minnie TB
03:33:05 Min
-HEE Click-

W bravery EEE TB mare! Unbred this year, has produced PWW previously when randomly thrown at an EWW.
KPH Equestrian
03:30:15 Jake From State Farm
Need gone!
-Unrated bravery bred 2-3yos!
-Includes a few wild W brave mares
100eb start
-HEE Click-
Minnie RID
03:21:25 Min
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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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