Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

10:58:41 Willow ~ TB Breeder

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I'm excited to see her week 7

10:55:02 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Em
That's not true, you have some pretty nice boys

10:52:51 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Sunni
On the bright side my stud has more W foals on his record

Insignia Elites

10:52:21 Em

Just breed to one of my studs xD all they give me are EEE lol

Sunni

10:51:26 Sunni bunny

Willow I gave up on mine, am $25k in the hole.

10:49:39 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

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Another one? Ugh, I give up

Insignia Elites

10:47:54 Em

I buy a new barn and then two days later Im like I need another one xD

10:46:50 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

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Another EEW?
Why is it the one time I want an EEE I can't get one?

Dash and Duchess

10:45:21 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, thank you!! Charm did such an awesome job on her!

10:44:55 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

DD
Wowzas, that is stunning

Dash and Duchess

10:42:56 DD | ~Squizard~

I can't *0* Her arts are so perfect 😭
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Bug in a Rug

10:41:40 Bug | Flea | KPH

lanie
he looks like a Trevor

or Ebony Rhythm, going off of his parents

Goddess lane

10:35:12 Lanie

Anyone have any ideas for his name?

Since I have yet to name him

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KPH Equestrian

10:34:15 Rapcoon | Jester

wind
ehh freshman LBs aren't all that helpful; since only 3yos can be on them, there's a good amount of EWEs and lower, so pretty much any stud with enough foals can get on them

Insignia Elites

10:34:03 Em

Can someone look at my stud Weaver and tell me what you think. I know he isn't the strongest out there but I feel like he had produced quite well

10:33:05 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

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I was breeding for an EEE. Now I still have that quest

Sunni

10:32:27 Sunni bunny

Wind the lead board isn't my strong suit.
I'd say it's pretty good.

KPH Equestrian

10:31:09 Rapcoon | Jester

goldspur
I'd say so, given his rating and pedigree

Sunni

10:31:06 Sunni bunny

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Didn't complete my quest but, am not as mad XD
at least his colorful EEE.

Wild Wind Stables

10:31:03 Wind

Is placing in the top 30 on a freshman sire single breed leaderboard any good? He's an X.

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10:58:41 Willow ~ TB Breeder

-HEE Click-
I'm excited to see her week 7

10:55:02 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Em
That's not true, you have some pretty nice boys

10:52:51 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Sunni
On the bright side my stud has more W foals on his record

Insignia Elites

10:52:21 Em

Just breed to one of my studs xD all they give me are EEE lol

Sunni

10:51:26 Sunni bunny

Willow I gave up on mine, am $25k in the hole.

10:49:39 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
Another one? Ugh, I give up

Insignia Elites

10:47:54 Em

I buy a new barn and then two days later Im like I need another one xD

10:46:50 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
Another EEW?
Why is it the one time I want an EEE I can't get one?

Dash and Duchess

10:45:21 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, thank you!! Charm did such an awesome job on her!

10:44:55 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

DD
Wowzas, that is stunning

Dash and Duchess

10:42:56 DD | ~Squizard~

I can't *0* Her arts are so perfect 😭
-HEE Click-

Bug in a Rug

10:41:40 Bug | Flea | KPH

lanie
he looks like a Trevor

or Ebony Rhythm, going off of his parents

Goddess lane

10:35:12 Lanie

Anyone have any ideas for his name?

Since I have yet to name him

-HEE Click-

KPH Equestrian

10:34:15 Rapcoon | Jester

wind
ehh freshman LBs aren't all that helpful; since only 3yos can be on them, there's a good amount of EWEs and lower, so pretty much any stud with enough foals can get on them

Insignia Elites

10:34:03 Em

Can someone look at my stud Weaver and tell me what you think. I know he isn't the strongest out there but I feel like he had produced quite well

10:33:05 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
I was breeding for an EEE. Now I still have that quest

Sunni

10:32:27 Sunni bunny

Wind the lead board isn't my strong suit.
I'd say it's pretty good.

KPH Equestrian

10:31:09 Rapcoon | Jester

goldspur
I'd say so, given his rating and pedigree

Sunni

10:31:06 Sunni bunny

-HEE Click-
Didn't complete my quest but, am not as mad XD
at least his colorful EEE.

Wild Wind Stables

10:31:03 Wind

Is placing in the top 30 on a freshman sire single breed leaderboard any good? He's an X.

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites