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Gem Queens Estate
08:40:44 Snow❆Gem
lol I'll try. ;P

Quest Level 5
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Win at the mini-game Money Hunt.

Completed: 0/5
Reward: 2,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits 1Capture Pass
Gem Queens Estate
08:36:44 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Yeah, I could see they were busy and backed up. Three 60+ guys waited like us no problem, but a 65+ old lady had to tell them she didn't like that someone was served before them who ordered AFTER them. O.o Doesn't she know some food is quicker to make?
Angels angels
08:33:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Geez gem that is dumb
Talen
08:33:23 
Highway driving > City driving
Gem Queens Estate
08:32:39 Snow❆Gem
Yesterday my family went on a short trip and had a snack at McDs... we waited almost 20 minutes for 3 wraps and a lemonade. O.o
Gem Queens Estate
08:31:54 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Ack! Highway sounds safer and 10 minutes isn't bad.
Angels angels
08:28:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Do I want to stay om the interstate all the way home and sit in traffic from a wreck for 10 minutes or get off early onto the highway and go through the city where no one knows how to drive? .-.
Gem Queens Estate
08:28:18 Snow❆Gem
@angels

lol OK? ;P
Angels angels
08:26:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Shhhh Gem
It isn't xD we don't talk about what day it is
Gem Queens Estate
08:22:16 Snow❆Gem
How is it already the 23rd?! O.o RO feels like it was about a week ago. LMAO
Journey Acres
08:21:26 Journie
Looking for roleplay partners. I'm flexible overall, shoot me a pm if you might be interested!
Gemstone Stable
08:15:24 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Morning! :)
Mythological
08:12:12 Crowley
Hey Ana
Angels angels
07:56:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was doing quest breeding lol
Lilac Fields
07:54:19 Lillie
cool angel
Angels angels
07:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Oh wow *.*
Vancouver
07:27:05 Ana / Van
Woops, turned*
Vancouver
07:26:26 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
This one :P
Vancouver
07:25:43 Ana / Van
Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD
DearBorn Ranch
07:12:13 Louise
that is always so sad lol

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Gem Queens Estate
08:40:44 Snow❆Gem
lol I'll try. ;P

Quest Level 5
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Win at the mini-game Money Hunt.

Completed: 0/5
Reward: 2,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits 1Capture Pass
Gem Queens Estate
08:36:44 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Yeah, I could see they were busy and backed up. Three 60+ guys waited like us no problem, but a 65+ old lady had to tell them she didn't like that someone was served before them who ordered AFTER them. O.o Doesn't she know some food is quicker to make?
Angels angels
08:33:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Geez gem that is dumb
Talen
08:33:23 
Highway driving > City driving
Gem Queens Estate
08:32:39 Snow❆Gem
Yesterday my family went on a short trip and had a snack at McDs... we waited almost 20 minutes for 3 wraps and a lemonade. O.o
Gem Queens Estate
08:31:54 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Ack! Highway sounds safer and 10 minutes isn't bad.
Angels angels
08:28:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Do I want to stay om the interstate all the way home and sit in traffic from a wreck for 10 minutes or get off early onto the highway and go through the city where no one knows how to drive? .-.
Gem Queens Estate
08:28:18 Snow❆Gem
@angels

lol OK? ;P
Angels angels
08:26:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Shhhh Gem
It isn't xD we don't talk about what day it is
Gem Queens Estate
08:22:16 Snow❆Gem
How is it already the 23rd?! O.o RO feels like it was about a week ago. LMAO
Journey Acres
08:21:26 Journie
Looking for roleplay partners. I'm flexible overall, shoot me a pm if you might be interested!
Gemstone Stable
08:15:24 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Morning! :)
Mythological
08:12:12 Crowley
Hey Ana
Angels angels
07:56:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was doing quest breeding lol
Lilac Fields
07:54:19 Lillie
cool angel
Angels angels
07:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Oh wow *.*
Vancouver
07:27:05 Ana / Van
Woops, turned*
Vancouver
07:26:26 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
This one :P
Vancouver
07:25:43 Ana / Van
Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD
DearBorn Ranch
07:12:13 Louise
that is always so sad lol

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Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:20 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Hello! Some of you already know me^^ it's me Dark! I've been making art for a long time and unfortunately worked on a very old, laggy iPad. Now that I have a new iPad, I'm open to learning!!
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I am open to criticism and help!
I am also interested in:
how much is it worth?
Tier?
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old art is in my gallery

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:29 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:21 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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latest art to criticize

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:24 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:38 AM


Gem
 
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Hi!!!! I LOVE this piece!!!!! I saw it on Imp's stable a few days ago and was just blown away. I adore the contrast and the lighting and the drama. It's truly stunning and I would totally steal it. I had to stare for a bit to find anything to critique haha!!! ❤️
A few little things:
  • Looking at the jewelry on the tail, the cuffs should be casting a very small shadow on the horse to illustrate that they're not just markings. Along the same point, the cuff closer to the base of the tail, there is hair growing out of it. Logically I think the hair would be trapped inside the cuff? So maybe erase the few strands there. And if I'm totally misinterpreting it and they are meant to be markings, please ignore lol
  • As I mentioned, I adore the lighting. It makes it super dramatic and just gorgeous. The only spot I would adjust slightly is the chest/front shoulder. It seems unnaturally light when the direct light source is on the opposite side of the horse.
  • Because the background is so vibrant and green, I think it would make sense to have a bit more of that color incorporated/cast onto the horse. However, for this piece it feels like more of a stylistic choice and would work either way.
  • Last tiny thing, looking at where the tail docks to the horse's rump, I feel like the rump should be in front of the base of the tail. Meaning that there should be some sort of shading making a distinction between the two areas with shading rather than a direct connection. If this doesn't make sense I'd be happy to sketch what I mean.

    Lots of love!!! ❤️
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:45 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you^^
First art on the new ipad - a lot of work go get better but ur tips are awesome as always^^
Gem!
oh and yea they are fur markings not jewelry but thank you!^^

Edited at January 31, 2025 10:48 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 11:54 AM


Gem
 
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Okay haha!! I would suggest maybe making the tail markings less shiny then so they don't look quite so metallic but they're still super cool :D
You're most welcome 🥰
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 04:46 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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new art for Criticism and price help!
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Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:15 AM


Gem
 
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Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:19 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you for always being here XD^^
I only do the black for the vampire - the dark atmosphere is supposed to make it a little creepier ^^
and yeah - hair is my biggest problem ;C

Gem said:
Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3



Edited at February 8, 2025 11:20 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:21 AM


Wolf Dancer
 
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So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:22 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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<3 <3

Wolf Dancer said:
So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!



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