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Fluffy's Cosy Home

01:31:34 Fluffy

Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Rose Crimson Stables

01:27:26 Crimson

Looking for premium upgrade, please PM me thank you

Boulder Creek

01:08:49

Lucky Ducky Lane

01:06:41

ISO a 3 month upgrade

Sweet Valley

01:02:15 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!

-HEE Click-

All the horses with the 💲 emoji in front of name are for sale.

Skyrim

12:58:27 Wynter/Ghostly

-HEE Click-
WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 200k. Multiple EEE and EWE producer.

MakeEm Fancy

12:52:29 Ally 💜

EWE+ ISH/SH/KNN includes a WWW. Need gone
-HEE Click-

Purestables

12:46:45

Selling 1 3 month upgrade or 2 1 month upgrades

Disney Acres

12:43:07

Wild EES WC Bravery TB mare 10k will lower
-HEE Click-

The Lazy Ninja

12:39:46 Jessie

Wild EPP WC Bravery WB 50k or send an offer
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January 29, 2023 11:14 AM

ShiningStar Stables

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This is one of my more recent pieces, and I want some critique on it! I really want to improve, so rip it apart!

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January 29, 2023 06:25 PM

Rivendell Steeds

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Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

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January 29, 2023 07:09 PM

SJ_Foundation

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I know some great mane tutorials I can send you if you'd like. I've seen white horses with black hair on this game, I think the mane just has too many strands and not enough movement. I'd love to share the tutorials that helped me. Just PM me!

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January 29, 2023 07:17 PM

Bellbird Estate

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I agree here

Rivendell Steeds said:

Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

also, I would lower the saturation so the horse doesn't have a green hue, since it's standing over ice not grass.

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