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No problem lol
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Thank you lol
Coldwater Meadows
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;)
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CM
We need you in the suggestion box lol
Minerva
07:35:00 Min
Theres a mod on now Angels
Angels angels
07:32:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Is there a mod on a side account hiding somewhere?
Sweet Valley
07:30:16 Anna/Jewel
Awww. I play the DT game too and a baby just hatched. Sooo cute!
Cappuccino
07:26:56 Heyy it's Capp
Shes super!
Wisteria Run Farm
07:24:37 Solar/Ria
And Angel XD
Wisteria Run Farm
07:24:24 Solar/Ria
Oh, she's pretty Echo!
Sweet Valley
07:23:41 Anna/Jewel
Cool.
Amethyst Ranch
07:21:01 Echo <3
<3 I'm happy with that week 4 :D
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Angels angels
07:20:27 [1k+ brindles] Angel
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Got a W too
Calela Eventing
07:20:14 Cali
Hey guys
Angels angels
07:16:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Just a random capture lol
Silver Melody Acres
07:15:32 Solar - KNNs
Pretty girl lol
Sweet Valley
07:15:23 Anna/Jewel
Nice capture
Angels angels
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>.>
Sweet Valley
07:11:34 Anna/Jewel
Wow, Fern. Gorgeous Manchado
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Coldwater Meadows
07:39:17 CM
No problem lol
Angels angels
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Thank you lol
Coldwater Meadows
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;)
Angels angels
07:35:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel
CM
We need you in the suggestion box lol
Minerva
07:35:00 Min
Theres a mod on now Angels
Angels angels
07:32:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Is there a mod on a side account hiding somewhere?
Sweet Valley
07:30:16 Anna/Jewel
Awww. I play the DT game too and a baby just hatched. Sooo cute!
Cappuccino
07:26:56 Heyy it's Capp
Shes super!
Wisteria Run Farm
07:24:37 Solar/Ria
And Angel XD
Wisteria Run Farm
07:24:24 Solar/Ria
Oh, she's pretty Echo!
Sweet Valley
07:23:41 Anna/Jewel
Cool.
Amethyst Ranch
07:21:01 Echo <3
<3 I'm happy with that week 4 :D
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
07:20:27 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Got a W too
Calela Eventing
07:20:14 Cali
Hey guys
Angels angels
07:16:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Just a random capture lol
Silver Melody Acres
07:15:32 Solar - KNNs
Pretty girl lol
Sweet Valley
07:15:23 Anna/Jewel
Nice capture
Angels angels
07:12:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
>.>
Sweet Valley
07:11:34 Anna/Jewel
Wow, Fern. Gorgeous Manchado
RFS Thoroughbreds
06:51:58 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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