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Need help testing this RID boy. With EEE mares, he gives EEP regularly, but I don't have any better mares to pair him with.
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Wild PWW WC KNN mare 500k obo
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Siren Sound Estates
11:52:03 S҉ Sem
What a showstopper!
-HEE Click-
In Manchado
The Fallen Rulers
11:31:33 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Anyone interested in W SD RID colts? 1k each
Wild_Potatoes
11:16:25 Potato
-HEE Click-
World class bravery for 1k
Port Royal Equines
11:15:01 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Anyone want these brave mares?
Sun Ranch
11:10:30 
Need help testing this RID boy. With EEE mares, he gives EEP regularly, but I don't have any better mares to pair him with.
-HEE Click-
Disney Acres
10:57:45 
EEW TB mare 40k will lower
-HEE Click-
Galloping_Gems
10:53:11 Gemstone
I agree
Wild_Potatoes
10:51:23 Potato
Bruh it’s silly how no one bids on a 1k WEP mare
The Lazy Ninja
10:50:03 Jessie
Wild PWW WC KNN mare 500k obo
-HEE Click-
Wild_Potatoes
10:46:43 Potato
-HEE Click-
Releasing these W horses, asking 1000$

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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