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Alpine Acres

01:22:18 Lily/Alpine

sure :)

Lynx Glory

01:21:56 ⛈ whisper/lynx

okay thank you :)

Alpine Acres

01:20:50 Lily/Alpine

yup, around the 17th if I'm not mistaken

Lynx Glory

01:20:13 ⛈ whisper/lynx

next capture party*

Lynx Glory

01:20:03 ⛈ whisper/lynx

is capture party in october?

Alpine Acres

01:10:02 Lily/Alpine

Pugsley
if you mean me, then yes xD

Tangerine Acres

01:07:53 Tang

ohhhh I am so excited about this boy!!

-HEE Click-

Havenfield Stables

01:07:19 Clara

thank you <3

Sweet Valley

01:06:17 Anna/Jewel

Haven- so pretty horse~!

Pumpkin pie ranch

01:06:15 Pugsley,flipsy,pug

Is that lily I spot?

Havenfield Stables

01:06:14 Clara

I'm so in love with this filly!! -HEE Click-

Alpine Acres

01:05:26 Lily/Alpine

yes, exactly like that!

Havenfield Stables

01:05:15 Clara

thanks :)

Havenfield Stables

01:05:08 Clara

Ah yes

Alpine Acres

01:05:05 Lily/Alpine

Havenfield
you need to go into the page of the horse's link that you want to post, and copy the link from your browser. And then post it in the chat :)

Havenfield Stables

01:05:02 Clara

-HEE Click- like. that?

Sweet Valley

01:04:35 Anna/Jewel

Has to have all the numbers at the end

Havenfield Stables

01:03:45 Clara

How do you post a link to the horse?

Insignia Elites

01:00:42 Em

Im so happy with her foals! -HEE Click-

Might put most my ebs to get her a high ABLB stud next RO

Pumpkin pie ranch

01:00:25 Pugsley,flipsy,pug

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Alpine Acres

01:22:18 Lily/Alpine

sure :)

Lynx Glory

01:21:56 ⛈ whisper/lynx

okay thank you :)

Alpine Acres

01:20:50 Lily/Alpine

yup, around the 17th if I'm not mistaken

Lynx Glory

01:20:13 ⛈ whisper/lynx

next capture party*

Lynx Glory

01:20:03 ⛈ whisper/lynx

is capture party in october?

Alpine Acres

01:10:02 Lily/Alpine

Pugsley
if you mean me, then yes xD

Tangerine Acres

01:07:53 Tang

ohhhh I am so excited about this boy!!

-HEE Click-

Havenfield Stables

01:07:19 Clara

thank you <3

Sweet Valley

01:06:17 Anna/Jewel

Haven- so pretty horse~!

Pumpkin pie ranch

01:06:15 Pugsley,flipsy,pug

Is that lily I spot?

Havenfield Stables

01:06:14 Clara

I'm so in love with this filly!! -HEE Click-

Alpine Acres

01:05:26 Lily/Alpine

yes, exactly like that!

Havenfield Stables

01:05:15 Clara

thanks :)

Havenfield Stables

01:05:08 Clara

Ah yes

Alpine Acres

01:05:05 Lily/Alpine

Havenfield
you need to go into the page of the horse's link that you want to post, and copy the link from your browser. And then post it in the chat :)

Havenfield Stables

01:05:02 Clara

-HEE Click- like. that?

Sweet Valley

01:04:35 Anna/Jewel

Has to have all the numbers at the end

Havenfield Stables

01:03:45 Clara

How do you post a link to the horse?

Insignia Elites

01:00:42 Em

Im so happy with her foals! -HEE Click-

Might put most my ebs to get her a high ABLB stud next RO

Pumpkin pie ranch

01:00:25 Pugsley,flipsy,pug

Angel

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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