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Galloping_Gems
05:04:43 Gemstone
Anyone wanna take my work schedule? πŸ€ͺπŸ˜…πŸ˜‚
Galloping_Gems
05:01:35 Gemstone
It pays the bills and the pets expenses so I’m happy πŸ˜‚
Galloping_Gems
04:56:26 Gemstone
I know I am. Sundays I don’t sleep cause of church πŸ˜‚
Nightingales Ridge
04:55:32 Issy
You're nuts
Nightingales Ridge
04:55:13 Issy
Oh my gem!!@ ooof
Nightingales Ridge
04:54:59 Issy
I have only 5 more days of work left!! I'm 5.5 month pregnant and fly home in 2.5 more weeks ☺️☺️☺️
Galloping_Gems
04:54:56 Gemstone
Not me. I already work DoorDash and grub hub from 9pm to 4am then I sleep 5-7 am the work my regular job from 8-5pm then I care for my pets and then take a nap from 7pm to 8pm then I repeat πŸ˜‚
Nightingales Ridge
04:53:24 Issy
Anyone want to work my 10 hour shift? πŸ₯° please and thank youu
Galloping_Gems
04:52:06 Gemstone
I can’t either. I had a 3 am intrusive thought πŸ˜‚
Nightingales Ridge
04:51:12 Issy
Yikes I can't stand too sweet of a coffee 😷
Galloping_Gems
04:48:39 Gemstone
If anyone says you can’t add to much caramel to a coffee. Know that they lied, I did that and am sick now πŸ˜‚
Alpine Acres
04:47:41 Lily/Alpine
Feel free to PM me if you have questions about breeding, I'll see if I can help you! <3
Galloping_Gems
04:46:53 Gemstone
How do I get all that?
Alpine Acres
04:46:07 Lily/Alpine
No problem! But you'll have much more of a chance of getting a WWW if you use a WWW stud on the LBs, and a WWW mare too :)
It doesn't always happen like that, and sometimes you might get higher rated horses if the match is perfect or the mare/stallion isn't rated WWW but is extra strong and a good producer
Galloping_Gems
04:40:47 Gemstone
Thanks
Galloping_Gems
04:40:37 Gemstone
Oh! Sorry I’m trying to get a WWW and I saw that match and got so excited at the thought of potentially getting my dream horse I didn’t realize the Scp and Str were bad
Alpine Acres
04:37:29 Lily/Alpine
The Scp and Str weren't great in that pair :)
Galloping_Gems
04:35:09 Gemstone
Oh
Lunalovegood
04:33:50 Loony/Loony Tune
Gem, your colts parents didn’t match very well I don’t think…
Galloping_Gems
04:30:39 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
You failed. Where’s the one W rating you were meant to have 😭🀦‍β™€οΈπŸ˜‚

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Galloping_Gems
05:04:43 Gemstone
Anyone wanna take my work schedule? πŸ€ͺπŸ˜…πŸ˜‚
Galloping_Gems
05:01:35 Gemstone
It pays the bills and the pets expenses so I’m happy πŸ˜‚
Galloping_Gems
04:56:26 Gemstone
I know I am. Sundays I don’t sleep cause of church πŸ˜‚
Nightingales Ridge
04:55:32 Issy
You're nuts
Nightingales Ridge
04:55:13 Issy
Oh my gem!!@ ooof
Nightingales Ridge
04:54:59 Issy
I have only 5 more days of work left!! I'm 5.5 month pregnant and fly home in 2.5 more weeks ☺️☺️☺️
Galloping_Gems
04:54:56 Gemstone
Not me. I already work DoorDash and grub hub from 9pm to 4am then I sleep 5-7 am the work my regular job from 8-5pm then I care for my pets and then take a nap from 7pm to 8pm then I repeat πŸ˜‚
Nightingales Ridge
04:53:24 Issy
Anyone want to work my 10 hour shift? πŸ₯° please and thank youu
Galloping_Gems
04:52:06 Gemstone
I can’t either. I had a 3 am intrusive thought πŸ˜‚
Nightingales Ridge
04:51:12 Issy
Yikes I can't stand too sweet of a coffee 😷
Galloping_Gems
04:48:39 Gemstone
If anyone says you can’t add to much caramel to a coffee. Know that they lied, I did that and am sick now πŸ˜‚
Alpine Acres
04:47:41 Lily/Alpine
Feel free to PM me if you have questions about breeding, I'll see if I can help you! <3
Galloping_Gems
04:46:53 Gemstone
How do I get all that?
Alpine Acres
04:46:07 Lily/Alpine
No problem! But you'll have much more of a chance of getting a WWW if you use a WWW stud on the LBs, and a WWW mare too :)
It doesn't always happen like that, and sometimes you might get higher rated horses if the match is perfect or the mare/stallion isn't rated WWW but is extra strong and a good producer
Galloping_Gems
04:40:47 Gemstone
Thanks
Galloping_Gems
04:40:37 Gemstone
Oh! Sorry I’m trying to get a WWW and I saw that match and got so excited at the thought of potentially getting my dream horse I didn’t realize the Scp and Str were bad
Alpine Acres
04:37:29 Lily/Alpine
The Scp and Str weren't great in that pair :)
Galloping_Gems
04:35:09 Gemstone
Oh
Lunalovegood
04:33:50 Loony/Loony Tune
Gem, your colts parents didn’t match very well I don’t think…
Galloping_Gems
04:30:39 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
You failed. Where’s the one W rating you were meant to have 😭🀦‍β™€οΈπŸ˜‚

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Art critique July 3, 2018 04:14 AM

Former Stable
 
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I was looking for someone opinions on my art
I currently charge 8k for a horse avatar do you think that price is right or should I change it

Example

https://i.imgur.com/KRwOGTn.jpg

I look forward to hearing your suggestions
Art critique July 3, 2018 08:58 AM


WildWillow
 
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Hi Kiralee!

Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.
That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.
However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.

For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!

I hope this helps!
WildWillow
Art critique July 6, 2018 07:17 AM

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WildWillow said:
Hi Kiralee!
Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.
For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!
I hope this helps!WildWillow














Thanks I didn’t redraw the mane/tail as I cannot at the moment Something I am working on

https://i.imgur.com/oHcNVYN.jpg

Here is another example

Edited at July 6, 2018 07:18 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 6, 2018 02:25 PM


WildWillow
 
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Hi again Kirralee!

The mane and tail on your newer piece is very good! If you are able too, on the edges of your mane I would take a blur tool or a smudge tool on a low power and go over the edges a bit. It would help make your mane and tail flow nicely.
Your horse looks a bit small compared to the background. Choosing a background that has a wider area will help your horse fit in well.
I'm unsure if you added the white markings but it looks like you did. I would go over them with a smudge tool to make it look like it is actually part of the coat rather than sitting on top.
Also, the horse's front hoof seems a bit squished. If it had to be cut that way from the stock, I would recommend either redrawing the hoof or taking parts of the other hooves to blend together to form a new one. Also, I would recommend taking a smudge tool and going over the very bottoms of the hooves so they look as though they are truly on the ground.
The last thing I would like to point out is the flower in the mane. The flower is very sharp while the horse is blurred. To fix this, you could either blur the flower or sharpen the horse.

Other than that, I can tell a huge improvement between the previous one and your most recent one!
Art critique July 7, 2018 05:02 AM

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https://i.imgur.com/Bb5U16R.jpg



My first attempt at drawing a mane and tail

Edited at July 7, 2018 06:01 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 7, 2018 06:47 AM

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Definitely better then me IΒ’ll say that right now 😂😂
Art critique July 17, 2018 06:20 AM

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https://s15.postimg.cc/m3duz3gpn/7_AD34_FA6-1_E59-40_FF-_BA15-67938431_DCF1.jpg

First line art

Edited at July 17, 2018 06:20 AM by Kirralee stud farm

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