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Glacier Bay Cove

08:13:41 Arctic Katz

YAY, getting better at not throwing all of my Ebs away in the store

Lynx Glory

07:53:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx

glacier
ooh yes xD my mom would love to have one too lol. her favourite bird species

Glacier Bay Cove

07:53:04 Arctic Katz

I would love to have a pet hummingbird

Lynx Glory

07:53:02 ⛈ whisper/lynx

but it's just not a reality for us and our home. too small, and we would prefer a large home where birds can still fly.

Lynx Glory

07:52:32 ⛈ whisper/lynx

i've always wanted a green cheeked conure and a tiel lol

Versailles

07:50:15 Versa

Ivy,
She's a green cheek conure. Conures are pretty loud. Not nearly as bad as sun conures, though lol

Wisteria Run Farm

07:49:55 Solar/Ria

Well, at least KNNs seem to like being good at Dressage lol
-HEE Click-

Crestwood Eq.

07:44:02 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

What type of bird is Icarus?

Kaldwin Stud

07:43:03 Tano

Aww I miss having tiels. My last one passed when I was 17 and I decided it wasn't really practical to get another and try to find a rental that would accept birds. So I've been 7 years without but I really miss having them around

Versailles

07:40:31 Versa

I mean, tiels aren't too noisy. They rarely scream. It's Icarus mostly

Crestwood Eq.

07:37:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

oh dear. must be loud

Versailles

07:35:51 Versa

Ivy,
Currently riled up, got a bunch of thunderstorm and flood warnings. They're not pleased with the thunder lol

Hummingbird Meadows

07:34:21 Bird

Honestly his favorite toy is a pool noodle. XD

Crestwood Eq.

07:33:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

how are the birds?

Versailles

07:32:57 Versa

Hi Ivy :)

Hummingbird Meadows

07:32:54 Bird

He does like the laser. I want to take him outside, but it's been so hot.

Crestwood Eq.

07:32:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa!

Versailles

07:32:22 Versa

Oh god, just make sure it's not rechargeable

Glacier Bay Cove

07:31:49 Arctic Katz

How about a battery operated laser pointer, would he like that

Hummingbird Meadows

07:30:40 Bird

@Glacier, no. I try to use a teaser wand and play with him, but he's not super interested

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Glacier Bay Cove

08:13:41 Arctic Katz

YAY, getting better at not throwing all of my Ebs away in the store

Lynx Glory

07:53:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx

glacier
ooh yes xD my mom would love to have one too lol. her favourite bird species

Glacier Bay Cove

07:53:04 Arctic Katz

I would love to have a pet hummingbird

Lynx Glory

07:53:02 ⛈ whisper/lynx

but it's just not a reality for us and our home. too small, and we would prefer a large home where birds can still fly.

Lynx Glory

07:52:32 ⛈ whisper/lynx

i've always wanted a green cheeked conure and a tiel lol

Versailles

07:50:15 Versa

Ivy,
She's a green cheek conure. Conures are pretty loud. Not nearly as bad as sun conures, though lol

Wisteria Run Farm

07:49:55 Solar/Ria

Well, at least KNNs seem to like being good at Dressage lol
-HEE Click-

Crestwood Eq.

07:44:02 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

What type of bird is Icarus?

Kaldwin Stud

07:43:03 Tano

Versailles

07:40:31 Versa

I mean, tiels aren't too noisy. They rarely scream. It's Icarus mostly

Crestwood Eq.

07:37:51 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

oh dear. must be loud

Versailles

07:35:51 Versa

Ivy,
Currently riled up, got a bunch of thunderstorm and flood warnings. They're not pleased with the thunder lol

Hummingbird Meadows

07:34:21 Bird

Honestly his favorite toy is a pool noodle. XD

Crestwood Eq.

07:33:16 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa

how are the birds?

Versailles

07:32:57 Versa

Hi Ivy :)

Hummingbird Meadows

07:32:54 Bird

He does like the laser. I want to take him outside, but it's been so hot.

Crestwood Eq.

07:32:43 Ivy / poison ivy

Versa!

Versailles

07:32:22 Versa

Oh god, just make sure it's not rechargeable

Glacier Bay Cove

07:31:49 Arctic Katz

How about a battery operated laser pointer, would he like that

Hummingbird Meadows

07:30:40 Bird

@Glacier, no. I try to use a teaser wand and play with him, but he's not super interested

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May 26, 2021 08:02 PM

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Heyy guys

I'm currently trying to get back into art and I'm trying to find my own style. I think I'm getting there but I'm not completely happy with my work. I can't put my finger on what it could be. The pieces below are more realistic pieces and I'm going to try working on more fantasy-like pieces to see if that helps me improve. Anyways I'm getting off track.

I'm just looking for a few people to hardcore critique my art so I can try and improve to the point I'm comfortable and happy with my work :)

Examples:

(newest one where i've found my style ^^)

Art Critique

May 27, 2021 05:23 AM

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Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

Art Critique

May 27, 2021 05:54 AM

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Thank you so much I really apperciate it! Not too harsh at all <3

Werty said:

Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD

But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^'

For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^

And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high.

The backgrounds are always incredible. <3

I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3

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