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Elite bravery geldings at auction:
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Pegasus Lane
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Desperately ISO an upgrade!
Purestables
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ISO breeding partner -HEE Click-

ISO stable set -HEE Click-
Piper Lane Farm
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Sherpa maps for 5k each available in my shop:
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Port Royal Equines
01:22:18 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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PEE-P+ ISH Brave mares for sale!

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Geldings. I need em gone!
Wild Wind Stables
01:16:58 Wind
-- Selling--
EPP Perlino Dun Rabicano Appendix colt
PEE Silver Roan Grullo Rabicano ISH filly
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Horses Of Eden
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Galloping_Gems
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EWE Colt. 5,000$
Galloping_Gems
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Ok Im releasing the boy

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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