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Galloping_Gems
10:22:44 Gemstone
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Just caught this girl a hour ago
Cloud Peak Stables
10:06:05 Cloud
A 2-3 in dia. brass main line is a pretty major pipe to be fixing. You're better off asking a plumber (or maybe Youtube? lol) for that one.
Hummingbird Meadows
10:05:59 Bird
@Dulcie, sounds like a job for a plumber.
Frog Judgment Acers
09:59:11 Dulcie/Crazy
Anyone on know about pipe fixing?
The main coming into the shared vacation cabin broke because it was left on over the winter by a relative
I think its like 2 or 3 inches & brass
Im planning to go up there soon & fix it but need to know what tools to bring
Tobiano Lady
09:52:17 Tobi | Nix
I'm glad you got something out of it as well!
Cloud Peak Stables
09:52:16 Cloud
And I'm happy to help with my own studs too <3 Bummer that my freebie straw was a color dud.
Cloud Peak Stables
09:49:22 Cloud
Of course <3 Glacialis looked promising and I loved his color. He not only landed high on the LB but he gave me lots of pretty foals too :)
Tobiano Lady
09:47:14 Tobi | Nix
*my studs & other people's studs. Should have clarified lol
Tobiano Lady
09:46:32 Tobi | Nix
Thank you again Cloud. I'm usually floundering a bit with studs so any amount of help is huge to me <3
Cloud Peak Stables
09:44:18 Cloud
lol oh no Tobi!
Tobiano Lady
09:38:51 Tobi | Nix
-HEE Click-
dodging your dad's tobi like it's an olympic sport
Just Dreaming
09:22:01 
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I cant tell if this is cute
The Painted Pantheon
09:21:42 Zee
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Im so proud of this girl I am so excited for her future
Just Dreaming
09:20:56 
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Random breeding turned out cute ish
winteria
09:18:55 
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ugh of course you're a colt
Glacier Bay Cove
09:15:22 Arctic Katz
Please RF, be kind to me next RO
Oak River Farms
09:13:58 Oakie
Heck yeah!!!! We finally have SD Breeder rewards!!
Angels angels
09:02:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yep still here :3
MoonFeather01
08:57:29 
Wow Angel, I can't believe you're still playing on here, I accidentally quit two years ago and the first username I see is yours lol
SavageMare
08:49:08 Moody
RF at its finest lol. She may throw you some shiny foals <3

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Galloping_Gems
10:22:44 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Just caught this girl a hour ago
Cloud Peak Stables
10:06:05 Cloud
A 2-3 in dia. brass main line is a pretty major pipe to be fixing. You're better off asking a plumber (or maybe Youtube? lol) for that one.
Hummingbird Meadows
10:05:59 Bird
@Dulcie, sounds like a job for a plumber.
Frog Judgment Acers
09:59:11 Dulcie/Crazy
Anyone on know about pipe fixing?
The main coming into the shared vacation cabin broke because it was left on over the winter by a relative
I think its like 2 or 3 inches & brass
Im planning to go up there soon & fix it but need to know what tools to bring
Tobiano Lady
09:52:17 Tobi | Nix
I'm glad you got something out of it as well!
Cloud Peak Stables
09:52:16 Cloud
And I'm happy to help with my own studs too <3 Bummer that my freebie straw was a color dud.
Cloud Peak Stables
09:49:22 Cloud
Of course <3 Glacialis looked promising and I loved his color. He not only landed high on the LB but he gave me lots of pretty foals too :)
Tobiano Lady
09:47:14 Tobi | Nix
*my studs & other people's studs. Should have clarified lol
Tobiano Lady
09:46:32 Tobi | Nix
Thank you again Cloud. I'm usually floundering a bit with studs so any amount of help is huge to me <3
Cloud Peak Stables
09:44:18 Cloud
lol oh no Tobi!
Tobiano Lady
09:38:51 Tobi | Nix
-HEE Click-
dodging your dad's tobi like it's an olympic sport
Just Dreaming
09:22:01 
-HEE Click-

I cant tell if this is cute
The Painted Pantheon
09:21:42 Zee
-HEE Click-
Im so proud of this girl I am so excited for her future
Just Dreaming
09:20:56 
-HEE Click-

Random breeding turned out cute ish
winteria
09:18:55 
-HEE Click-
ugh of course you're a colt
Glacier Bay Cove
09:15:22 Arctic Katz
Please RF, be kind to me next RO
Oak River Farms
09:13:58 Oakie
Heck yeah!!!! We finally have SD Breeder rewards!!
Angels angels
09:02:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yep still here :3
MoonFeather01
08:57:29 
Wow Angel, I can't believe you're still playing on here, I accidentally quit two years ago and the first username I see is yours lol
SavageMare
08:49:08 Moody
RF at its finest lol. She may throw you some shiny foals <3

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Critique Ari July 13, 2022 06:58 PM


Quizzical Quarters
 
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Y'all, I have no idea what to improve on. Because I wanna improve everywhere. So I can't pick just one thing to focus on. I also am SO stuck between styles I want. Should I stick my more painty style, is that what y'all like? It's fun being more painty, but I absolutely love sharper styles that look a bit more "natrual" I guess, its just so pleasing to the eyes.

I'll post my gallery below so y'all can see my recents lately. I definitely need help/tips on eyes. They kill me to do. Be as harsh as you need, because that's the only way imma learn anything. Besides, Ari's a bitch I can take it :')

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Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:04 PM

The Golden Horse
 
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i love all the styles XD it looks so cool!
the hair is also amazing and i don't even notice the eyes like at all...

Edited at July 14, 2022 12:31 AM by The Golden Horse
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:17 PM


Reindeers

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This isn't much of a 'critique', but your style is amazing, especially the hair! You've definitely improved from when I bought art from you some moons ago.
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:21 PM

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I really love your horse anatomy, it's really spot on! The only thing I have to critique is the hair, if you are going for realistic that will have to be an area to work on(looks kinds like vines more than hair). As I notice you do some semi-realistic which looks good, but my attention get caught on the hair that doesn't quite look right. You've done a couple really nice ones!

Edited at July 13, 2022 07:27 PM by Beans247
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:40 PM

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I'm not a HEE artist but something i've learned from drawing is your style is CONSTANTLY changing... you're trying new things (even without knowing it) each time you draw anything... look at your drawings and figure out what YOU like about them... make notes of what you like and what you want to change up your drawings are beautiful but your style is your own and its constantly changing you do something a bit different each time you draw lol... do what you like and figure out what you don't like if you have 2 ways you like to draw horses figure out what you like or don't like about the styles you use and see what you come up with by combining what you like from the two styles. Your art is really really beautiful though :) I looked at your gallery and its stunning :3

Critique Ari July 13, 2022 09:20 PM


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I love more painted type looks. I don't like sharp art but also not super smudgy. I like softness. I prefer your current style to the style you practiced with your latest premade. As an artist though I'm constantly trying different things trying to work out my own techniques
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 10:24 PM


Tranquility
 
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Hollow Tree Acres said:
I love more painted type looks. I don't like sharp art but also not super smudgy. I like softness. I prefer your current style to the style you practiced with your latest premade. As an artist though I'm constantly trying different things trying to work out my own techniques


This. All of it. 100%. Thanks Hollow for writing it out so I didnt have too 😂.
No, part of the reason I love your art so much is your style, your unique touch! Sure, if you arent enjoying, that's ok too, it's your art so try something new! <3 Every time I see a piece of art done by you, I 100% know it's you without looking at credits! Personally, as an artist myself, that's what I strive for, uniqueness of "my" style. And you have literally done it perfectly!
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Some points I notice on your current style (so not the new one)
- the eyes, I only noticed them becuase you pointed them out on your post, and I LOVE eyes, I feel like they draw the entire piece together and I also love the way I do eyes. So, if you'd like, just pm me, and I can give you a "tutorial" so to speak, and you can help me becuase I've been wanting to plan one for a while, but you could help me test it out :D if you wanted to of course.
- I mean, I really dont have much other critique, on your very last piece, the shadows on the horse (near shoulder, ears, belly) were very unnecessarily sharp and contrasting so I would smudge them down or blur them down a bit
- also, on white markings (need to do a tutorial for them too so pm me!) I think if you copied them on another layer and take a rough watercolor eraser around the edges at a low opacity, it might help making them look more realistic
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:D Your awesome Ari!!
Critique Ari July 14, 2022 12:16 AM


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Honestly I really love your style of hair and like what Hollow and Tranquility have both said that the painted look is awesome and is what makes your art unique. I also prefer your current style rather then the last piece you practised but everyone is different so others might like that style more. Not really much I can think to critique cause I'm not that great at doing that haha.
Critique Ari July 14, 2022 09:09 PM


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Thank you all so much!! It's greatly appreciated 💚

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