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Rolling in Hay
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Art auction! SB 1k
Shadow Acres
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ISO: 1m upgrade
Wild Wind Stables
11:53:50 Wind
-- Selling--
PEE Silver Roan Grullo Rabicano ISH filly
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-- Breeding --
Currently 30th for Freshman Appendix Quarter Horse Sires. 5 covers still avalible!
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Watercolored
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WWW SH colt for sale, his 1 years old.
Demon Souls
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HRT glass and INT glass for sale only 80k each
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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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