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07:06:02

Oh you're cute -HEE Click-

Tamarack Mountain

07:05:56 Opal

well she is pretty -Click-

Rubygem

06:58:18 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

well im gonna go bye

Rubygem

06:57:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

thanks (:

06:56:04 ZEZ - ZZ

Ooo that’s a cutie Ruby

Rubygem

06:53:48 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

-HEE Click-

Oooo a 1 of 90 color rating:D

06:39:39 ZEZ - ZZ

Yeah first one is the final, I just might edit how I’ve placed the credit a smidge
Second one was just for funnies lol

06:38:02 Anna/Jewel

Zwquine- I like the first one

06:17:10 ZEZ - ZZ

Procrastinated so hard I did this
-Click-

Also lol
-Click-

05:05:12 Rose

Oh hello -HEE Click- <3

Nightingales Ridge

05:05:11 Issy

Wow Sierra hes gorgeous

Nightingales Ridge

05:04:11 Issy

Very nice Brody 😊

Calela Eventing

01:30:30 Cali

Hey Win

01:27:29 River / Brody

Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
-HEE Click-

11:43:11 Win | Water

Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.

Red Horizon Ranch

11:42:03 Red

He's so pretty Win

11:38:37 Win | Water

Look at this guy -HEE Click-

11:38:08 Win | Water

o

Sierra Views Stable

11:37:44 AZ

Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it

11:35:00 Win | Water

How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

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07:06:02

Oh you're cute -HEE Click-

Tamarack Mountain

07:05:56 Opal

well she is pretty -Click-

Rubygem

06:58:18 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

well im gonna go bye

Rubygem

06:57:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

thanks (:

06:56:04 ZEZ - ZZ

Ooo that’s a cutie Ruby

Rubygem

06:53:48 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

-HEE Click-

Oooo a 1 of 90 color rating:D

06:39:39 ZEZ - ZZ

Yeah first one is the final, I just might edit how I’ve placed the credit a smidge
Second one was just for funnies lol

06:38:02 Anna/Jewel

Zwquine- I like the first one

06:17:10 ZEZ - ZZ

Procrastinated so hard I did this
-Click-

Also lol
-Click-

05:05:12 Rose

Oh hello -HEE Click- <3

Nightingales Ridge

05:05:11 Issy

Wow Sierra hes gorgeous

Nightingales Ridge

05:04:11 Issy

Very nice Brody 😊

Calela Eventing

01:30:30 Cali

Hey Win

01:27:29 River / Brody

Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
-HEE Click-

11:43:11 Win | Water

Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.

Red Horizon Ranch

11:42:03 Red

He's so pretty Win

11:38:37 Win | Water

Look at this guy -HEE Click-

11:38:08 Win | Water

o

Sierra Views Stable

11:37:44 AZ

Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it

11:35:00 Win | Water

How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

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October 16, 2019 08:45 PM

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I'm not done yet, but any thoughts, advice, critiques, whatever on this?

https://i.postimg.cc/xjFcGg7c/sketch1571276177472.png

Edited at October 16, 2019 08:46 PM by Ankou

October 16, 2019 08:50 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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It looks really nice so far!

I love your muscle structuring in the shoulder.

My only critiques would be the neck ties in very high it should ideally connect right above the middle line in the breast area. And the head and neck look significantly too small for the rest of the body.

But accurate proportions will come with practice. :)

October 16, 2019 09:01 PM

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Thanks so much for your help! I seriously think I have a HUGE problem with the head and neck compared to the body. At least now I have a new area to focus on next time I draw. :)

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