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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

Diamanté

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

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December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

Former Stable

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

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December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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