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Aurora's Fields

07:52:59 Jenifael

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Having the same problem here Peggy :(

Kuewi knn stable

07:49:13 Bazinga Force

I just noticed her color

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Dash and Duchess

07:47:08 DD | ~Squizard~

Grimm! And I feel your pain 🥲 my 2yo pulled the same 1 up stunt 😭

Pegasus Lane

07:46:56 Peggy (or) Peg

...welp
Knew you were going to be a dud
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Grimmoire Gardens

07:45:48 Grimm(us)

I should have known you weren't both gonna be nice <-<

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Dash and Duchess

07:43:06 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, Ooo you got there right in time then! Good luck with the foal, fingers crossed for a shiny WWW <3

Ambrosia

07:42:21 Amb

Good call! There was only one spot left for a straw on his forum so I took it. That'll be the plan. Thanks!!

Dash and Duchess

07:40:44 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, Ooo I'd throw her to Malik again! Maybe +scp?

Dash and Duchess

07:39:51 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, that's amazing! She's was definitely worth whatever you paid for her! Ugh I feel that :') The fancy ponies love to not match anyone xD if you want any matching help I'm happy to! <3

Ambrosia

07:38:36 Amb

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She matches Silver Dollar but only produced EEE with him last time so I don't know

Ambrosia

07:37:36 Amb

I bought one nice AALB girl and she gave me 2 WWW fillies!
No plans yet... my AALB girl is a tough match. And I have yet to match my 2 yr old -.-

Dash and Duchess

07:36:20 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, dang you've got 3 WWWs already?? You're definitely on a good track! Any RO plans? 👀

Ambrosia

07:35:09 Amb

Oh for sure. I'm excited for the new few months to really get the ball rolling with them. I have 3 WWW girls so I'm on a good track so far

Dash and Duchess

07:34:03 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, AAs are the best!! I'm so glad you're liking them! I got into them kinda accidentally, best accident ever xD

Ambrosia

07:32:42 Amb

Yesssss!! I'm obsessed with your girl! I'm on my fourth month of breeding AA full time and I love them. I HAD to get out of the SH world lol

Dash and Duchess

07:31:34 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, Tobi fixes everything xD Éowyn's Zz and Ee so she might be lucky enough to stay 🤣

Ambrosia

07:30:17 Amb

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And she's tobi so like... it's fineeee

Dash and Duchess

07:28:59 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, xD same lol! They can be cruel but I'm not dropping them 😂

Ambrosia

07:28:30 Amb

I still love them though 😖

Dash and Duchess

07:28:00 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, they can be so mean 🥲

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Aurora's Fields

07:52:59 Jenifael

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Having the same problem here Peggy :(

Kuewi knn stable

07:49:13 Bazinga Force

I just noticed her color

-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

07:47:08 DD | ~Squizard~

Grimm! And I feel your pain 🥲 my 2yo pulled the same 1 up stunt 😭

Pegasus Lane

07:46:56 Peggy (or) Peg

...welp
Knew you were going to be a dud
-HEE Click-

Grimmoire Gardens

07:45:48 Grimm(us)

I should have known you weren't both gonna be nice <-<

-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

07:43:06 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, Ooo you got there right in time then! Good luck with the foal, fingers crossed for a shiny WWW <3

Ambrosia

07:42:21 Amb

Good call! There was only one spot left for a straw on his forum so I took it. That'll be the plan. Thanks!!

Dash and Duchess

07:40:44 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, Ooo I'd throw her to Malik again! Maybe +scp?

Dash and Duchess

07:39:51 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, that's amazing! She's was definitely worth whatever you paid for her! Ugh I feel that :') The fancy ponies love to not match anyone xD if you want any matching help I'm happy to! <3

Ambrosia

07:38:36 Amb

-HEE Click-
She matches Silver Dollar but only produced EEE with him last time so I don't know

Ambrosia

07:37:36 Amb

I bought one nice AALB girl and she gave me 2 WWW fillies!
No plans yet... my AALB girl is a tough match. And I have yet to match my 2 yr old -.-

Dash and Duchess

07:36:20 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, dang you've got 3 WWWs already?? You're definitely on a good track! Any RO plans? 👀

Ambrosia

07:35:09 Amb

Oh for sure. I'm excited for the new few months to really get the ball rolling with them. I have 3 WWW girls so I'm on a good track so far

Dash and Duchess

07:34:03 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, AAs are the best!! I'm so glad you're liking them! I got into them kinda accidentally, best accident ever xD

Ambrosia

07:32:42 Amb

Yesssss!! I'm obsessed with your girl! I'm on my fourth month of breeding AA full time and I love them. I HAD to get out of the SH world lol

Dash and Duchess

07:31:34 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, Tobi fixes everything xD Éowyn's Zz and Ee so she might be lucky enough to stay 🤣

Ambrosia

07:30:17 Amb

-HEE Click-
And she's tobi so like... it's fineeee

Dash and Duchess

07:28:59 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, xD same lol! They can be cruel but I'm not dropping them 😂

Ambrosia

07:28:30 Amb

I still love them though 😖

Dash and Duchess

07:28:00 DD | ~Squizard~

Amb, they can be so mean 🥲

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Critique

July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

Former Stable

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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#206055
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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

Fox Crest Manor

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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